You need to edit, have a beta reader, and not rely on spell check.
You have a great plot line; the first where I agree with a dark side ending. However, when you allude to ideological difference's and getting facts wrong, it would be nice to know what those things are instead of having a huge plot holes on what they are and people just storming off in a huff.
I can improve this story twenty waysone writing cannon script correctly. Editing would be nice.

I really really enjoyed this fic! Great job! 3

I’m kind of bummed that hermione ended up not playing quidditch like she said she would in the beginning. But I think it’s hilarious how Dumbledore just keeps randomly giving them hundreds of points

It was really good!

camping is fun I suppose.

I love! This with my whole heart!

interesting. thanks for sharing. a hermione/draco tag would have been nice though.

Am I right in thinking that the last part was a reference from Big Bang Theory? When Hermione says, “ I so informed you thusly.”

Okay, I liked what I read in the Prologue but by chapter 11 I can see that you changed your story. It was misleading and I really hate when people do that. I expected Hermione and Harry not Hermione and her FIRST COUSIN Drako.

This is so good!

This is my fourth time reading this and it is still as amazing as the first time. It has all my favorite things: Bellamort, Dramione, Snily, and I kind of like that the dark side won. Keep up the good work.

Your sister is pure evil. I love it!

so cheesy. overall I enjoyed it

your story is really nice. I love it

I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!