Reviews for His End
qwertyui chapter 6 . 5/12/2013
I never liked Gendo as a character, people have to fill in the blanks to much with him. The only thing we get in the anime is 'I miss my wife, so I closed my heart' and that's hard to justify and take seriously.

About this fic, I think it's too short for you to sell Shinji's suicide to me. It needs more detail put in.
Blitzstrahl chapter 6 . 5/12/2013
Recognition cookie woo, but you gotta remember gendo does love shinji gendo just couldn't get over his fear of being a parent with out yuis guiding light as it where, then he buried that guilt in his heart with the instrumentality scenario
Guest chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
Nothing about Rei in this, curious.

Does this take place after Rei II's death?
BML2400 chapter 4 . 5/10/2013
Ooooo, nice turn of events. I harbor a small amount of hope that this ends on a non-tragic note. Probably not but compelling none the less.
Blitzstrahl chapter 5 . 5/10/2013
go that update speed i crave o.0
Traitor of All Traitors chapter 5 . 5/10/2013
Gendo's a cold fuck! Put a bullet through his head and let Shinji go free into the next world. Maybe Shinji will get lucky in the next life.
Blitzstrahl chapter 4 . 5/10/2013
Gendo after all has the tech to see your very soul and move it about at his whim its simple for him to yank Shinji's soul out of unit1 or Lilith and a session in Rei's Soul Imagery/memory upload tube thingy and Gendo now has Shinji v2.0 under his thumb
Traitor of All Traitors chapter 4 . 5/9/2013
Oh, please! Gendo being compared to Naraku and Sesshomaru is not a good thing. Naraku, a definite, but not Sesshomaru. Second, I've read volume twelve of the Evangelion manga, and Gendo revealed to Shinji himself that he didn't care about him at all. The idea of Gendo wanting him alive only for the Instrumentality Project is only to show that he views Shinji as nothing more than a pawn, not a person or family relative. I'm almost done with an Evangelion story of my own where Shinji is able to move on with his life and be free from manipulation during the course of a season, so you look at it when it's finished. Peace.
Blitzstrahl chapter 3 . 5/9/2013
Silly shinji like gendo will let you stay dead lol IM thinking if his soul went to Eva ones core cause I highly doubt yui would let Lilith reclaim it after all its Shinji
Traitor of All Traitors chapter 3 . 5/8/2013
Traitor of All Traitors chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
Everybody in the franchise of the anime/manga universe exploits Shinji, even his own parents, whom I feel are downright immoral in every sense of the word. Thus, Shinji's very existence is full of pain and emptiness because no one truly gives a damn about him. Figures why this can be remedied only in fanfiction. Sad, lonely or dead, he's miserable and no one lifts a finger to save him from the emptiness he lives with. What happens at the end of it?
The Jack of Daniels chapter 2 . 5/7/2013
I don't like dead Shinji, dead Shinji make me sad face

but beyond my own personal taste. this is good and I dig it's style, Dude