Reviews for Explorer
QUEENSPELLER67 chapter 1 . 5/7
That was adorable
Abhro chapter 1 . 5/6/2014
You've gotta make it multi-chap.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
Nicely done, I really like it. Hope ya make more chapters.
Falsetta-Arias chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
Mmmmm... ChessShipping...I'd love some more ChessShipping fics out there, especially multichapter ones. Please do consider writing more!

I like your descriptions! Though the characters come off as a tiny bit abrasive. Since Hilda and Hilbert don't have a set personality, you can't exactly be OOC. You may want to think about how you want your Hilda and Hilbert to appeal to your audience though. I couldn't get a good feel of your characters probably because the length of this chapter, but if you make it multichapter I think there's potential to make their characters really bloom!