|Reviews for Fire Power|
| Catlover4536 chapter 16 . 6/28
...More! I loved this so far, and it's a great story.
| Tail-chan chapter 16 . 11/25/2015
Actually I don't really like a story with OC in it, but this story... GOLD!
AND YOU JUST HANGING UP THERE
I DEMAND A CONTINUE OF THIS
| BlackGryphon101 chapter 16 . 7/11/2015
Are you still continuing this story because it's really well written and I've read the whole thing severel time I'm hoping that it's not a dead fic because I can't wait to hear Marco's reaction to finding out that Thatch and Ace are alive.
| The Keeper of Worlds chapter 16 . 3/30/2015
This is going to be FUN:)
| xShirayukixRukiax chapter 16 . 3/19/2015
Finally, I finished all 16 chaps. What to say? ah...I absolutely love it! Ace is one of the few side characters that I love and I've always been looking for decent stories about him and you hardly come across something as good as this. I like the concept of the parallel world and how the Quake-Quake fruit came into play.
It's interesting that he took up physics. Perhaps to study more about his power? Anyway, I love how you introduced your own characters and how a few of them had more or less similar traits to people he had known.
And then...there is Roger...then there's Tatch...awesome! When I first read Roger's name in the earlier chapters plus the fact that the particular room is for VIP who are special, I already anticipated the father and son thing.
You are really an awesome author and hopefully you finish this story. I'm looking forward to it. Take care!
| Cvrious chapter 16 . 2/7/2015
please please please continue this. It's one of the most interesting stories I've read it ages! Please!
| Maya5392 chapter 16 . 1/16/2015
... Luffy felt really OOC with the meeting... Anyways! Because this fic was so FRIGGIN' good, I broke my curfew and stayed up 'til 3am(now) to read it! At first, it felt reeeeeaaal awkward for some reason! Then I got used to it. I wish you good luck on updating!
| Guest chapter 16 . 10/2/2014
Please update i love this fanfic its so inspiring and uplifting and interesting i just love it so please update soon
| Guest chapter 16 . 7/22/2014
Cant wait to see marco and everyome elses reactioms when they find out thatch and afe are real and roger the marines reactionsare -going tto be priceless(imagining th
em in my head)
| pingo1387 chapter 16 . 7/7/2014
This is an amazing story! Very in-character and wonderfully written!
| ExpertoftheBlade chapter 16 . 7/1/2014
Great story, hope you update soon.
| JarOfIdeas chapter 16 . 6/7/2014
Please update i want to know how wil the WB pirates gonna react to this
| alynawatlovers chapter 16 . 4/7/2014
Aaaaa! I totally stopped watching Bleach so that I could finish reading this and it's so good that I'm practically biting my fingernails with excitement and glee, I really can't wait for the next chapter! Thanks for all the hard work!
| 94insane chapter 16 . 3/18/2014
Oh oh oh oooooooh. I LOOOOOVE THIS. SO AMAZING. I LOVE U. PLEASE DO'T STOOP :(
| LDK chapter 15 . 3/10/2014
***This review is for chap. 16, just my co-account holder already left a review for that chapter and it sucks.*** This story is probably my favorite fiction here. Holy shit, its so fucking awesome! I absolutely LOVE how you have written Ace's character, him being really good at physics but still being a hothead just works so well! The idea that the two universes were connected makes more and more sense every time something from each world is explained in the context of this story. Man, this fic has freakin everything! AU ace, but cannon super strong Luffy, and brotherly love, and marines, and action, and suspense, and mystery, holy crap. I can not stop raving bout this! I cant wait until someone external to the straw hats discovers Ace's current status (alive) and what the marine, Whitebeard's (whoever is left) and the people from California's reactions will be! I mean, all of Ace's profs and colleagues learning he is actually a super powerful pirate? Who is made out of fire? God damn! Also, Luffy's presence and the fact that he is the pirate king is awesome. When you wrote him standing on the figurehead arms crossed and threatening... SO badass. What role will the OC's (mainly Conrad) play in this story? Is Conrad going to become a pirate (btw I think Dan would be an awesome pirate... just sayin)? THANK YOU for writing this, it really, really gets my imagination flowing. That's what I love in a story! Thank you so much for writing this, and I look forward to the next update!