|Reviews for Riley's Choice|
| PrincessLyoka chapter 22 . 3/4
Woo, this was good!
| rosie.horgan.7 chapter 22 . 3/4
| Charles chapter 21 . 3/3
Love it! Tink and Oakley! Please
| Guest chapter 14 . 2/12
Hey, I've got a bit behind on this story but omg I love it so much! It made me laugh when you unintentionally used the phrase "empty-handed" right after Volt lost his hand ;) and omg I love the "they give us the guns but they don't pull the trigger" line. And ooh! Since Riley died I suspected suicide - I guess it looks that way. Argh! I'm so intrigued! Great writing as always.
| XxEyelinerHeartsxX chapter 20 . 2/9
I have a feeling he'll have to worry about careers too! And the brawl was bound to happen!
| XxEyelinerHeartsxX chapter 19 . 2/9
Well it was better for them to separate now than later. At first I thought Oakley was dying. XD
| laurenrulez1 chapter 20 . 2/8
Continue soon please
| PrincessLyoka chapter 20 . 2/8
I think Oakley is gonna kill Bell (wow, I sound so cruel). Or maybe Oakley comes to his senses. I don't know. I hope he does. But the Games are getting to him now...
| Elysian Dawn chapter 19 . 2/7
Ah, Bell. She proves to be just a kid like she first entered the picture - coming in with that flashlight mishap, ending by taking off like a crazy. Props to Oakley. She's a walking death trap for smarter tributes who find a way to utilize her flaws. He can do better on his own.
Can't wait to see what happens when Oakley encounters someone else among the remaining tributes. Tink and Dock have kept their heads down, and with two Careers still out and about, it'll be interesting to see how the field shakes up.
| PrincessLyoka chapter 19 . 2/4
I think Oakley survives, but then again, he's just been bitten by a venomous snake. If he is to die, then how will there be eight more chapters? I think Bell saves his life or something. I dunno. IT'S JUST TOO GOOD!
| laurenrulez1 chapter 19 . 2/3
Continue soon please
| Elysian Dawn chapter 18 . 1/30
Ah, I've gotten lazy about reviewing lately. But here we go - and a fine couple of chapters here.
I'm really liking Oakley and Bell connecting with a bit of a human side to the Games here in the arena's final stretch. It's good to see them just as companions and developing slowly, not with any forced feelings right out of the gate. It makes the two more believable as a team in desperate circumstances, and it highlights the times they work together and trust each other, such as when Oakley tells Bell to tree-jump.
I do like how you're really building up to Dock and Tink. Even though they haven't been shown really, the...hype, I suppose, around them as intuitive characters, rather than hulking colossi, makes them a lot more interesting and potentially lethal opponents. Great writing!
| XxEyelinerHeartsxX chapter 18 . 1/29
Whoo! I thought there was gonna be an alligator in the water or something! I'll admit the chapter wasn't too action packed aside from the boars, but we all have to have those kinds of chapters though right? Your writing is awesome! I love your imagination! I can't wait until Monday!
| PrincessLyoka chapter 18 . 1/29
This was really good. I'm actually wishing Bell and Oakley stay as allies together.
| Charles chapter 17 . 1/21
Oakley plus tink equals greatness