|Reviews for The Adoption Of Harry Potter!|
| hpfanscs chapter 33 . 3/12
I enjoyed the story. A quick tour without Hogwarts at all. Nicely done.
| Guest chapter 33 . 12/26/2013
| P-Webes chapter 33 . 11/11/2013
nice story but is it finished?
| RainbowDuck chapter 14 . 10/18/2013
Your story plot is good and original but the actual story itself is terrible. It feels like you have rushed to write it down and it includes many mistakes. I would happily read the story but a fair bit of it makes no sense. I suggest you get a beta to help you thicken your story. If you do manage to redo your story please let me know as the plot line is amazing :)
| PairingMatters chapter 33 . 6/22/2013
How many chapters will this story be when it is completed?
| ZoeyMarieSnape chapter 33 . 6/16/2013
:D Is there going to be an aftermath of the battle? I think Dumbles should freak out for his plans not working out... .-.
| mambajama chapter 33 . 5/28/2013
The end, I assume.
| mambajama chapter 12 . 5/28/2013
You need to reproof this story, cause some of them words isn't giving out all the letters, example, some the should be they, them, sorry
| mambajama chapter 2 . 5/28/2013
Amazing, awesome, mythical, etc how each paragraph kept me reading, even though chapter one was so short that I almost stop reading this story, sorry, short chapters is for those not loving to read.
| PurpleBullet chapter 33 . 5/24/2013
I can't wait until you post the next chapter.
| PurpleBullet chapter 16 . 5/24/2013
In chapter 3, Mafalda Hopkirk put baby bindings on both kids. Shouldn't that show up in health scans?
| whitebuffalowmn chapter 33 . 5/24/2013
| akasanta chapter 33 . 5/24/2013
Very good chapter. Looks like we're near the end of this story.
| Penny is wise chapter 33 . 5/24/2013
Lackluster fight almost has lackluster as the one in canon lol. Awesome chapter.
| RRW chapter 32 . 5/21/2013
Hmmm...this could really be a great story but it is all over the place. For example Harry was 7 when he met the Weasley's at his birthday party and then 2 chapters later they are meeting again for the 1st time on the train. There are no dates so when Harry meets Lucius in the bookstore why would Harry say the last time he saw Draco was on the train? The train to Hogwarts was the previous chapter...and then next thing you know Harry sends an open letter to Voldie and he is 15? What happened to the previous 4 years...and what houses were they sorted in? Basically this story has the outline of something really spectacular, however because it lacks a cohesive structure, it loses focus and makes it difficult to follow.