|Reviews for Before Yesterday Comes and Tomorrow Dawns|
| Vilinye chapter 15 . 5/6
What story were you co-writing? I'd love to take a peep at it.
| gonnahaveagreatday chapter 3 . 5/4
This is beautiful, I did want to know more about River and the Doctor when they're alone in a matter of speaking.
| Vilinye chapter 14 . 2/14
Oh, what does that imply?
| Jessiekat89 chapter 14 . 2/14
What do Amy and Rory know, that they can't tell...
| helenxxx chapter 14 . 2/4
Wonderful and ominous and delightful
| Vilinye chapter 13 . 12/17/2014
I hope that's Ponds
| Tineyboppa chapter 13 . 12/15/2014
Is it Amy & Rory?
I'm so glad you've updated again, I'm enjoying this story.
| JaneScarlett chapter 12 . 10/16/2014
'River was right: this was not her Doctor... This Doctor loved with both his hearts.'
That is a fantastic line...
While I'm not a huge fan of looming, I actually like the mention of it in here. Nice tie into Classic. And I like the idea you have here, that Ryan could communicate with his sister while she was in-vitro. Interesting, playing off the Time Lord's telepathy... nice job on this chapter!
| Vilinye chapter 12 . 10/16/2014
Aww, that's so sweet
| helenxxx chapter 11 . 9/24/2014
| Leighawen chapter 11 . 7/24/2014
So I started with Just a Minor Rewrite and apparently couldn't stop until I got here. Addicting. :D
| JaneScarlett chapter 11 . 7/21/2014
Awww... thanks for putting Mickey in for me! Actually- you did a great job with his voice!
I do love when fic ties so neatly into canon, and I love that you managed to mesh the moment when he snaps his fingers after FotD to him putting together the pieces about River's handwriting being the same as the note that brought him to the Library to the one he'd gotten in every regeneration.
Also. Eleven being grumpy with his younger self was just hysterical!
| Vilinye chapter 11 . 7/10/2014
Aww, He made it. The proper he made it.
| dar40mn chapter 11 . 7/9/2014
Aww, the 10th Doctor chasing after River. Sweet.
Finally another chapter... Yay!
| J chapter 10 . 7/1/2014
Please finish fanfic, it's so goo and I would like to see what's next.