|Reviews for Queen Of the Sea Daughter|
| ToyStoryIsAwful chapter 1 . 7/9/2017
Thailand was an Axis Power never forget
Also this is the Suicide Squad of fanfictions
| Flarecraft11 chapter 4 . 4/9/2017
The prophecies are all supposed to rhyme
seven half bloods shall answer the call,
to storm or fire the world must fall.
an oath to keep with a final breath,
and foes bear arms to the doors of death
| Audreycastro13 chapter 26 . 4/7/2017
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/19/2016
"So where are you come from?"
should be 'so where are you from?' or 'so where do you come from?'
Amphitrite's answer "Greek"
should be 'Greece'. She comes from Greece and is Greek. There is a difference.
"Your name doesn't sound like a Greek name at all"
Wth, it IS a Greek name. Unless Mat is an idiot who just doesn't know then that's fine.
"eyes sparkle with intelligent"
should be 'eyes sparkle with intelligence' Intelligence not intelligent.
The first chapter is where you should make a good impression for the rest of your story after the summary. But it is riddled with grammatical mistakes. Not flaming or hating, just giving you constructive criticism.
| Child of Dreams chapter 18 . 10/3/2016
The 1968 Leonard Whiting and Olivia Hussey version of Romeo and Juliet?
| Guest chapter 26 . 12/10/2015
I absolutely love how this story is going!
When's the next update?
JasonxPearl forever. It was a little cliche a tiny bit fast and forceful but other than that it was good.
| ClarrisaCallista Dawn chapter 26 . 11/1/2015
having Kronos's POV might be interesting then you could move to Luke POV
| Fanfic-lover02 chapter 26 . 9/21/2015
Luke and how he has to share his body and how He is trying to get the control and Pearl
| crookedkings chapter 23 . 8/24/2015
Not to be rude or anything I personally don't .a twilight crossover
| crookedkings chapter 3 . 8/24/2015
I don't want Luke to be evil.
| Drakenn chapter 5 . 8/16/2015
Nice plot line and characters. But grammar is just ugh, also prophecy isn't that good
| Iveya Jade's psycho mind 08 chapter 25 . 8/13/2015
Is Luke still gonna die? Will Jason and Piper still have their moments? Can we see Pearl just snap from the stress and unleash her powers. Kind of like Aang from AtLA.
| katraj0908 chapter 14 . 7/25/2015
| katraj0908 chapter 8 . 7/25/2015
I feel like all these romances are going way too quickly. Like Luke is 7 years her senior and Annabeth and Percy don't get together for another 4 years, plus on their first quest canon they had a certain dislike for each other and here suddenly they're fighting and they kiss like no.
| katraj0908 chapter 7 . 7/25/2015
Ugh Luke just no.