I love it!
It's a really great story!
Good job :))

oh snap

OK UR STUPID. ITS COLT NOT CULT. A CULT IS A WITCH GROUP. THE GUN IN THE TELEVISION SHOW "SUPERNATURAL" IS CALLED THE COLT, AND IT WASADE BY SAMUEL COLT IN THE LATE 1800's. I KNOW EVERYTHING ABOUT THAT TV SHOW!

This was a good first fan fiction. I like Lexi, she seems very interesting. The only thing was a few parts were confusing, like John saw something in her shoulder but you don't show him taking it out or what it is or why it was making her cold. And when they get to Bobby's she hasn't woke up yet even though she had been talking to John after she got thrown. Little things like that. I do look forward to seeing what else they get into.