Reviews for Of The Wolves And The Orphans |
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![]() ![]() ![]() hello friend are you going to update by any chance even though it has been seven years |
![]() ![]() I have to say, I absolutely love this story so far. You're writing technique and language are fantastic; and I sincerely hope you come back to this and finish it. It would be s shame to not finish such a well written piece so far. I hope to see more at some point. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not to be a jerk, but isn’t Hawkeye a little too forceful here? He seems like he’s playing the villain instead of the mentor role |
![]() ![]() There's something about this story, about the way you write, that makes you read every single detail and then go back and read it again and again. That is what sets your story apart from all the others, and I'm glad to have read it too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this! Please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, Stockholm syndrome up the ass. This fic is making me hate Hawkeye so much like no joke. What they are doing to her is so far is so illegal, I expected better from Hawkeye. Time to read the other chapters I guess... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sooooo much easier to read! Thanks for fixing the html. Keira is a fascinating character; I hope to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You need to fix the visible html that is obscuring your story. I can tell from the first few chapters that you have a lot of storytelling talent but the story is unreadable with all of the markup visible in every paragraph. |
![]() ![]() wtf |
![]() ![]() Either read the story with all the extra letters and numbers you have in here cut them out or put them on the beginning I just can't understand anything and I'm going to stop reading this |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a good story so far; but why are ch. 4 to 5 are in code? ~xLunaxNightingalexDuskx |
![]() ![]() ![]() you really need to go through and fix chapters because the coding makes it practically impossible to read and I really want to read this story. please fix soon! |