Reviews for Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Team Eviolite - Book 2: Time Shocked!
PrinceSpyro chapter 15 . 5/20
I was just re-reading, and I noticed something between chapters 12, 13, and 14... where in there did Ally and Eve's parents switch Austin and Ally back? I mean in chapter 12
Xicharu chapter 1 . 5/14
It is weird to see this ending so abruptly, but I hope you can fix that plothole. Good luck on part 3, I hope to read another tale of this series with these high standards. Thanks for your effort! See ya on book 3!
Person55 chapter 23 . 4/20
Oh! I almost forgot! I'm happy to see that book 2's over. I've been reading team eviolite since I started high school and the fact that book 3 is going to be started soon is very exciting for me :D (of course take your time though, your updates may take a long time but they are worth the wait as I can tell that you put your all into them and they are well written)

Anyways I'm excited to see what happens in book 3 once it comes out, and as always great story!
Person55 chapter 24 . 4/20
An interesting story idea! I like the princess's playful childish personality and I hope you get to publish the book you plan on making, it looks like a really fun story that I would definitely buy if you published it
Sacredstar Mentor chapter 14 . 4/6
Alex and Eve show their true feeling in the gates of time and now their love is everlasting. This is heartwarming story right here no joke.
acrus chapter 2 . 3/24

(love your work by the way)
PrinceSpyro chapter 23 . 2/10
Arg, I can't wait for the next chapter
AilingStar chapter 2 . 11/3/2017
If I had to give a single critique... I'd say that you're treating the characters as if they're perfectly rational beings, except when it comes to romance. It's the imperfections, the bouts of characters being irrational, that makes them compelling and real.
This story has potential, but overall it's just middle of the road for me.
Damariobros chapter 22 . 9/19/2017
Finally another amazing chapter of Team Eviolite! Nice job on this! I like where this is going, hopefully they get back to their world in time to save the world!
Acrus chapter 1 . 9/17/2017
CarnelianFox chapter 22 . 9/16/2017
Your writing still and characterization are so amazing! I'm glad to see this! I'm sorry I haven't been reviewing as much lately, but I still think you're awesome!
Fan type person chapter 22 . 8/27/2017
Hey it's me again (sorry if you see this comment twice something happened and I'm not sure if my comment went through)

I really love your stories, especially team eviolite and I just wanted to maybe ask that you put Austin in the story more? I know that time shocked is supposed to be about Alex and eve but I just live Austin so much! He is my favourite character in your stories and I love the whole "magic nerd" thing he has going for him. But since Alex has sword skills and inventing skills and eve is super powerful I feel that you should maybe develop Austin's character some more bececause he just doesn't feel as developed as your other characters and there isn't much to his character other than the fact that he loves ally. Even though Austin isn't in time shocked a lot I still love reading time shocked and Austin is still my favourite character and I'm really looking forward to see what you to next in the story
Fan type person chapter 22 . 8/27/2017
Hey it's me again. I love your stories but if I can make a request can you maybe put Auston in the story more? I understand that time shocked is about Alex and eve but I just love Austin so much! He is my favourite character in your stories and so far I've really liked the whole "magic nerd" thing that you did with him and I really want to see what he does with magic, also with Alex having sword skills and inventing skills and eve being really strong I feel like Austin kind of needs some more development for him to be on the same level as the other main characters
Fan type person chapter 22 . 8/27/2017
Hello snivypro! Or I guess evening meadow grace now I have been reading your stories for several years now and I have gotta say that I love the time shocked is turning out, I have to also say though that you are starting to put way too many characters in the story. Still though I do love your stories and I really hope to see how you continue team eviolite
flareon71 chapter 22 . 8/26/2017
Oh my oh my oh my!
First I thought that having the cast get trapped in the human world was something, but Alola? Surprises all around!
And it looks like we're starting to get some more exposition to Eve's mystical powers... I was wondering when there'd be more exposition about all the wizard stuff :P
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