Reviews for Pickup Truck
Emmaline3 chapter 9 . 8/16/2013
I wish I'd had this to read when I was 17! Excellent description of the emotions of a too-young-to-be-knocked-up teenager and the horrendous decisions to be made. Yeah, it's a good thing to have choices, but no one can describe the remorse when the one to terminate is made and you get to carry that remorse throughout your life-time. This story is also a blissful memory of life on the North Shore; sun, sand, bronze and buff surfers, all things mind-bending and varying mistakes made... it's frozen in time for me and totally without censor!
Love, love, love your story!
amelia chapter 9 . 8/15/2013
held my breath the whole chapter.
Infidi chapter 9 . 8/15/2013
really enjoying this
GRLTRP chapter 9 . 8/15/2013
Excellent chapter. I have to say, you definitely put me through the wringer with my emotions on this one. I was on both sides of the fence for a minute and with the I love you before she went back, I wondered what would happen.
coltgal chapter 9 . 8/14/2013
I'm glad they didn't go through with it:). My heart breaks for them though. I'm an old and it isn't easy no matter the age or maturity but anything is possible when you love someone that much. I'm really enjoying this funny, sad, and real story.
insanemum chapter 9 . 8/13/2013
Wow - that was full-on!
writtenbyabdex chapter 9 . 8/12/2013
Well... just so you know, you had me scared to freaking death with this one... I almost couldn't read it but I'm glad I finished it.
coltgal chapter 2 . 8/12/2013
Still early but this story is really fun! I love what you've done with the characters:). It's fantastic
BoogieJo78 chapter 9 . 8/11/2013
Great chapter.
Loved it!
bonz245 chapter 9 . 8/10/2013
Such a good story...excellent chapter..thanks.
natalayx chapter 9 . 8/10/2013
Oh my god, oh my god, oh my god.

I had a feeling Edward only said they can't have the baby out of panic and that he was gonna change his mind...

Smirks and Sail are so freaking adorable! My heart was breaking for them during the sad parts of this chapter, but I couldnt stop myself from smiling because of how sweet they are together.

But, oh dear. Now for the fun times of telling their parents and then Dani and Remington. I'm gonna be so mean and say I hope they all break up so Smirks and Sail can be together.

And lol four hundred dollars ain't a year supply of diapers and formula... Poor kids are in for a shock. But they'll get through it! They're strong.

I love this story so much! You're amazing! xx
keyecullen chapter 9 . 8/9/2013
I cannot imagine being egged. And little did those stupid people know...she kept her baby. Hard decisions to be made for sure. But I am rooting for Smirks and Sail!
keyecullen chapter 8 . 8/9/2013
That has got to be the most difficult situation to be in. Eep!
lovecarolina chapter 9 . 8/9/2013
love the story, but your portrayal of pro-lifers is unfair. we're not all like that, and not all planned parenthood employees are angels.
Ninnie chapter 9 . 8/9/2013
Throwing embryos...seems hypocritical. HA.

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