|Reviews for Pickup Truck|
| MamaJoyof3 chapter 12 . 11/9/2014
| Becky.Moreno chapter 12 . 11/3/2014
Ummmm...OK. So you're not in a charitable mood.
So glad you're working on this story again, not gonna surgar coat. I HATED the way delinquent ended. Your father-in-law is in my prayers. Take care pretty lady. As my friend had tatted on her arm. " Its all good, if its not all good then its NOT all done. :-D
| Pepa chapter 12 . 10/25/2014
That was a strange ending... Is it ok to laugh? Can't wait for more!
| Loves chapter 9 . 10/20/2014
| DAZZLINGBRASIL chapter 12 . 10/15/2014
I have no words to express how happy I am that you are finally writing this again. I liked Dusty, but I ABSOLUTELY LOVE this story. I lost count of how many times I re-read this. This is AMAZING. Hilarious. Original. The whole family dynamic is outstanding. Hopefully you will have mercy on you fans and don't take too long to update
| Guest chapter 12 . 10/15/2014
Oh, how I love them!
| Guest chapter 12 . 10/13/2014
Loved it. Incredible as usual! Thank you!
| Robward17 chapter 12 . 10/14/2014
Holy shot I've missed this craziness!
| bonz245 chapter 12 . 10/14/2014
| reds-red chapter 12 . 10/14/2014
Yes! You updated! Thank you.
| Debbie3850 chapter 12 . 10/12/2014
aww I've missed these guys...great to have them back, i LOL at a lot of this, well done Mary. Poor Fleabag I hope he is okay? Update soon, love you :) xo
| erika shoval chapter 12 . 10/12/2014
| rubyblue9696 chapter 12 . 10/11/2014
CHAPTER 11 2ND REVIEW (you know why):
Edward is full of shit.
I tickle my fingers up the arm he has hooked around our child. He kisses the soft spot behind my ear. I lift his hand to my lips, like I might kiss him, too.
But I don't.
I bite him. Hard.
Thin hand bones bend under my teeth and veins move under pressure. Edward shoves me off his lap, groaning in pain, but I keep clenching.
"Let go!" he yells, trying to push my head back with the ball of his hand on my forehead.
I bite harder.
"Please!" Smirks finally shrieks.
He shrieks. Like a girl.
I didn't make him bleed, but my teeth broke skin.
Fuck his skin.
"What the hell?" he asks, shaking his wounded claw. Devil.
I push him. "I'm not your whore, Edward."
His dark eyes darken incredibly darker. "What?" he questions harshly.
*CRACKING UP!* - Dude, I've already read chapter 11 and every other past chapter like four times over, but this part above I have read AT LEAST 20 times. Brilliantly worded and utterly hysterical! Love, Jess xxx
...now, about this new update of yours...um...I CAN'T BE MORE EXCITED!...i just KNEW you couldn't NOT finish this lovely and highly entertaining piece of crazy perfection...sooo...now i read...love...xxx jess
| ksw3 chapter 12 . 10/11/2014
OMG! Thank you so much for this update. I had forgotten how truly wonderful this story was. I have missed these two. Please please finish this sweet story. I love how you bring the ocean smell and breeze thru. It just brings everything to life. Please keep us updated on your publishing. I'm on your FB.
Karen Coe Ward. That's my RL name. Lol. Take Care! Thank you for all the wonderful EB stories you have shared in the past. It has been fun!
| malleelee chapter 12 . 10/10/2014
If this was anymore real, the fleas that I am allergic to would have left welts, and the juvenile parents of Bella and Smirks would be filing for joint custody of the baby. Taking a real happening and making it belong to each of the readers is the forte of this author. Now I need to get the gritty sand off my feet.