|Reviews for Pickup Truck|
| Tinsley Warren chapter 5 . 6/20/2013
This is wishful thinking here, but I hope Edward does like her. He notices things that no one else seems to.
Poor Bella! They couldn't even spell her name correctly!
I love James! I wish I knew her!
| vivalarye chapter 5 . 6/19/2013
Uh oh. Baby daddy is totally going to find out next chapter. Loved it!
| vivalarye chapter 4 . 6/19/2013
I love james. such a spunky girl. and of course I love bella. and smirks too, duh.
| FionaSummers chapter 5 . 6/18/2013
This is fantastic, I love the attention to detail. Poor bela, I hope she tells Edward ASAP. He's obviously pretty in love with her...
| alisapay1 chapter 5 . 6/18/2013
Thanks for such an awesome chapter! Everything sounds totally accurate for teenagers! Can't wait for Bella to tell Edward! Mwah!
| sassy41 chapter 5 . 6/17/2013
my goodness bella what will you do
so many decisions
| Vanilla19 chapter 5 . 6/17/2013
Awesome loving this story. TFW
| jkkhreedy chapter 5 . 6/17/2013
Waiting for Edward to find out he impregnated Bella (with one L)! Keep up the great writing!
| Erroneous78 chapter 5 . 6/16/2013
I'd Say Smirks is a lot more observant than Remington is.
Oh my! That is not a decision I would ever want to make. I mean, I have 2 children but to be that young again and in her situation. I'm not sure what choice I would make. GAH.
I am absolutely lovin this story. You dont know how many times i have giggled aloud whilt reading. I really can't wait for the next update.
Love it :)
| Erroneous78 chapter 4 . 6/16/2013
Oh crap! Things are really starting to get real for Bella.
Edward knows something's not right. I really hope she tells him soon.
I think Charlie may surprise her. I think he'll be pissed, but I think he'll be quite supportive too.
Just don't tell Esme. She'll have them married off in 5 seconds flat!
OMG! When your boobs come in! I mean that's a shocker. Just wait til the baby is born and your milk arrives. Jeebus.
| Erroneous78 chapter 3 . 6/16/2013
Green-Eyed Save Mart Guy counts our change and hands over the goods. "Good luck," he says.
James snatches our purchases from his hand. "That was rude. These are for my mom."
SMG gets really, really red.
As do I.
"We're teenagers!" James whisper-yells, acting all appalled. "We have our whole lives ahead of us."
I seriously thought I would die from laughing so much. I know it's a serious situation but these girls are awesome. I love their sense of humour!
Now I see what happened with Renee. God, what she and Charlie must have gone through. I can't even begin to imagine.
I get the tiniest feeling that maybe Edward is a little more into B than she is him. Unless they are just that good friends.
How their lives are about to change.
| Erroneous78 chapter 2 . 6/16/2013
I want a friend exactly like James. She is so freakin awesome :)
"This isn't the time to strike a pose, Sail. Get your fucking shoes on. We can Vogue after we find out if you're knocked up or not."
And asking for a new calendar. So priceless!
So she & Edward are just friends. Hmmmm...I suppose feelings could develop from here - if she's not kidding herself.
Remington. He just seems like a douche. But then, he's a boy. At that age, all of them are douches!
Love the turn about with Charlie & Carlisle. Did Renee die or just take off? Did I miss something there?
GAH! It's show time!
| Erroneous78 chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
This brings back such memories ;) Only in the UK, I'm pretty sure bench seats are non existent :(
What could go wrong? I can't wait to find out :)
| ElectricChild chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
You write so beautiful. I'll most likely be dead before this is done, the anticipation is killing me! :)
| edzzie chapter 5 . 6/16/2013
I LOVE THIS STORY SO FAR!
I DIDN'T WANT TO START READING IT YET BUT I COULDN'T HELP MYSELF NOW I CAN'T WAIT FOR AN UPDATE!
ANOTHER WONDERFUL STORY BY YOU!