Reviews for The Attraction Equation
shehazi chapter 5 . 5/16/2013
WEINER! Give her wiener for lunch!
shehazi chapter 4 . 5/16/2013
Aww shucks, I think she won him over with the wiener comment. Maybe he's hoping he'll get to give her one tomorrow!?
Thanks for sharing.
gigi9598 chapter 5 . 5/16/2013
Oh so good! this is going to be fantastic! thank you
JulieToo chapter 5 . 5/15/2013
I think Edward's faux boyfriend is named Fabio. Or possibly Sergio. Tim or Jim sound more like nose-picking athletes with foot fungus. Not that there's anything wrong with nose-picking athletes. I do draw the line at the foot fungus.
Chicsarah chapter 5 . 5/15/2013
These two are just too cute and funny!
GorGirl chapter 4 . 5/15/2013
Her weiner quota is used up for the day, Can't wait to see what happens at his apartment!
Judyblue95 chapter 5 . 5/15/2013
uhhhh...not gay! i love that she messed up the shirt order in his closet!
Duvi chapter 5 . 5/15/2013
Poor Edward he must be going crazy!
alisapay1 chapter 5 . 5/15/2013
Hot accountant musk!? Yummy! Thanks so much for writing! Mwah!
mimimgr chapter 5 . 5/15/2013
this makes me smile... he likes her... hehehe
darcy13 chapter 5 . 5/15/2013
This chapter reminded me of The Wizard of Oz-Judy Garland version- (random, I know). I was thinking about the opening black and white scenes in Kansas and then Dorothy gets to Oz and everything is in technicolor.

Bella is going to open Edward's eyes to technicolor! Can't wait!
jesigrl007 chapter 5 . 5/15/2013
oh damn! ties...sound kinky ;)
2muchtrouble chapter 5 . 5/15/2013
She's messed up his closet? Poor Edward.
Twiddler83 chapter 5 . 5/15/2013
Okay this chapter gave me whiplash ... First he was like ... All nervous then he's all my shirt has never looked better?
Just Sus chapter 5 . 5/15/2013
Boy, Edward is a real enigma, isn't he? Why doesn't she just jump him?
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