Reviews for Book 1 - Anarudi
yeti1995 chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
I just caught up with all your work, and I have to say, it's amazing! I really look forward to seeing where this story goes...
Nice first chapter... Brilliant descriptions, especially the part where you described Scar's agony after the hyena attack... You kept him alive... That is awesome! XD I did notice, that in your other story too, Zira has the birth name Tamani.. But I did not expect you to make her his cousin... Then wouldn't that make Kovu's and Kiara's marriage incest? Of course, they're lions, so it may not be much of a problem.. I hear that's how white lions are born.. :P
Anyway, the writing here was excellent! I'm following this story, and I wait for another chapter! Nice work!
Iheartninjago2010 chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
Sounds awesome! I was just curious if kiara and Kovu are gonna be in this story later on? Update soon!