Reviews for Asleep
josht1987 chapter 8 . 12/17/2017
Are you going to continue This? It's pretty great from my perspective.
keitaropurple69 chapter 9 . 8/15/2017
I love this story and it is very original, but i was wondering if you were going to add anymore chapters to the story or not?
pawsrule chapter 9 . 7/15/2017
Interesting chapter, and I was surprised!
Just a reader chapter 8 . 6/8/2017
Very nice story. Waiting for the next chapters. Thank you very much. ;-)
pawsrule chapter 8 . 10/18/2016
Wonderful chapter!
Blue Luver5000 chapter 8 . 10/17/2016
Great chapter
texan-muggle chapter 8 . 10/17/2016
Your update rate leaves something to be desired, but then again I'm not writing it...

Grammar is much better. Lots better on the continuity of tenses.

Couple of minor issues...

1. "In regards of our daughter..." Should be "regards to"
2. Your first 2 paragraphs need some splitting. Each one could topically be split into 3-5 paragraphs. Right now those suffer from "wall of words" syndrome.
Guest chapter 8 . 10/16/2016
Marysue Hermione fic much?
Lugia'sChallenger13 chapter 7 . 6/10/2016
Can't wait for the next chapter and is Marius' obsession with Hermione a somewhat romantic one?
412 chapter 7 . 2/6/2016
This fanfic is amazing. I find they way you have captivated both Harry and Hermione to be pretty damn accurate, or near accurate, same thing, really. Anyways, the way the story is developing, I would like to say that it seems like an amazing adventure for me to read. Anyways, I wish this review could be more than just an encouraging remark, oh well. My name is 412, The Last Marauder, and I approve this message.
anotherboarduser chapter 7 . 2/6/2016
Interesting chapter
Lalia x chapter 7 . 2/5/2016
Yikes! I just realized I reviewed and didn't sign in... this is my review!

PS- I cant believe this story only has 73 reviews. Idk how anyone could pass this story!

WOW! This story is so crazy! (In a good way, of course!) I absolutely love it! Hermione's story makes Harry's fight with Voldemort seem like child's play. This story is so put together and very well written. I love the suspense and romance. Please update soon!
Guest chapter 7 . 2/5/2016
WOW! This story is so crazy! (In a good way, of course!) I absolutely love it! Hermione's story makes Harry's fight with Voldemort seem like child's play. This story is so put together and very well written. I love the suspense and romance. Please update soon!
starboy454 chapter 7 . 2/4/2016
excellent update
Blue Luver5000 chapter 7 . 2/4/2016
Great story.
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