|Reviews for Missing Nin's|
| Leaning Leon chapter 13 . 3/11
This plot is extremely interesting, you need to keep it up
| llazo4108822 chapter 13 . 3/10
I love this fanfic and you should make more chapters pleases.
| YungHime chapter 13 . 3/10
The plot is great the quality is great. This is one of my favorites
| Ayrmed chapter 13 . 3/10
The plot is original and really twisted which is good. The writing is done well and the characters well thought out.
| Fleightfire chapter 13 . 3/10
Excellent chapter, *sigh* tooo many good ninjas dead, can't wait for the evil hokage to fall
| YungHime chapter 12 . 2/24
Dang who isn't working the Hokage? But why is what I want to know next...or soon. Then aaaawh Kakashi! Man, he just can't get a break. I'd give him a hug if he wasn't already yknow dead
| Ayrmed chapter 12 . 2/24
That was a traumatizing chapter. I can't believe how much Konoha went to hell. Excellent writing!
| Fleightfire chapter 12 . 2/24
You know, I never would think the elders are good this time and the hokage is corrupted, it's usually the other way around you know
| Brooklyn Wilson chapter 11 . 2/8
It's good... But not as good as it would be if I wrote it. Lol only joking are you making any more? Tis is good - I will finally have something to do when I become bored. Thanks Cailin.
From your crazy, weird, idiotic sister
Brooklyn Wilson xD
| Nyaruto chapter 1 . 2/8
I dont know why tthey couldn't just left without anyone noticing. The murder seemed to be not needed.
| YungHime chapter 11 . 2/3
Oh my geez Lee! Then something is up with Akatsuki, is Zetsu following them? Then well Gaara will accept Naruto but how will he get in
| NotSoSlimSh4dy chapter 10 . 1/26
can you cut the paragraphs in half? its easy to get lost in them. thank you
| xXYour DoomXx chapter 1 . 1/20
That was awesome. Really liked the murder scene
| YungHime chapter 10 . 1/20
Aaaaawh Kurama as a baby! If not the Akatsuki then who? Itachi and Kisame are so cute lol! Then the hug! I don't care, he tried and that's all that matters. Awh shit, Hidan and Kakuzu. I cant wait to see what happens next
| blackm0765 chapter 10 . 1/20
Somebody should call the cops about all your character rape. Fuck that shit about not being evil Naruto and Hinata are evil. You have a too many plot holes in this story like your attempt to justify the cold blooded murder of Sakura and Kiba which pointed out that the Hokage was giving them the orders so Naruto and Hinata where the ones comiting treason by defying him because no matter what was ordered it was there duty to obey the Hokage so they are nothing like Itachi who was ordered by the Hokage to kill his clan so anyone listening to the council is a traitor. What's with Sakura hate I mean boo hoo she hits Naruto (the guy who constantly harrases her even though she told him in no uncertain terms she doesn't like him the way he likes her(If he was one of my friends I would have beaten it in his skull to not harrass a girl because he wanted her to return his affections; actually I have before)) whose was almost constantly in her face yelling about a date the same guy who tried to trick Sakura into kissing him by using henge to disguise himself as Sasuke Naruto does not get a free ride because he is the main character he has got plenty of flaws. Why is Kakashi not upset about the murder of his student someone he promised he would not let get hurt is she not as important as Naruto and Sasuke. Why has Itachi not killed the two traitors to his village to protect the peace, both are operating under someone other than the Hokage I doubt canon Itachi would take them in.
Please don't tell me it is all because it is AU beause if it's that AU you should have just written an original story with ocs with how ooc everone is but you didn't because no one would read the shit. I apologize for my grammer I'm to lazy to wastecanymore time with this review.