| Reviews for Break in the Clouds |
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  Guest chapter 12 . 7/8 Carlisle only thinks he loves Bella. He’s oblivious. He lets his parents shit on her and he tears her down himself. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/9 So Bella expects sympathy because she married someone for the attention he gave her how pathetic |
| Guest chapter 11 . 12/12/2017 like he needed to add in "on the sly" god he sounded like a complete fucking moron! |
| Liz chapter 32 . 9/21/2017 Beautil simple real |
 sue1zide chapter 32 . 9/10/2017 I guess things ended the way they should have. |
| sue1zide chapter 20 . 9/10/2017 No matter what Jasper saw or heard, he has no right to do that to her. |
| sue1zide chapter 17 . 9/10/2017 If she doesn't respect herself then why should anyone else? |
| sue1zide chapter 16 . 9/10/2017 What is she doing to herself? |
| sue1zide chapter 15 . 9/10/2017 People treat you the way you allow them to. |
| sue1zide chapter 11 . 9/10/2017 Good way to keep their secret Edward. |
| sue1zide chapter 9 . 9/9/2017 I was questioning that too. |
| sue1zide chapter 1 . 9/9/2017 I'm intrigued by this. It's very different from other stories I've read. |
| Just Sus chapter 32 . 5/12/2017 Good story, and I hope they are happy forever...this is a pretty sweet story for you, CaraNo! |
| Just Sus chapter 29 . 5/12/2017 Straight to it, Edward! Plus, she wants to control him...wait til he finds out Bella is knocked up, Why isn't anyone on birth control here? |
| Just Sus chapter 15 . 5/12/2017 How sad, But I lost my brother and a dear friend to pancreatic cancer, and I know how painful it is...poor Rose! |