|Reviews for Show Me Something More|
| grandmachix chapter 1 . 5/27
*pant, pant!* A highly erotic story. Well executed.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/7/2016
This is a beautiful piece of writing. Very passionate. I've read this piece several times but felt the need to comment this time. Kudos to you.
| ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 6/13/2015
Oh, I read and reviewed this whole story over at Discordia's side of things as well. It was really quite good.
| bighair83 chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
Awesome for first chapter. I have always been curious about this...
| Heatherl8367 chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
So far out of my comfort zone, but wow. You've blown my mind. That was utterly beautiful. The connection was palpable. Amazing.
| Hadley Hemingway chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
Soooo hot and so well-written! This is a great twist for this contest - I love that you've taken something that is even more taboo and made it such a beautiful and caring sexual moment. I also enjoyed how much she really was invested in his pleasure without regard for herself, though his attention at the end was an excellent surprise for her (and for me!). Thanks so much for this creative approach to the idea of "anal" - well done, lovelies!
| Silkyway chapter 1 . 5/15/2013
Holy $hit that was so freakin hot...
| sharonjane chapter 1 . 5/15/2013
A well deserved winner. Congratulations to both of you. That was one of the hottest thing I have ever read. I will be looking forward to the continuation.
| pricana chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
This fic is so HOT! I'm so glad you are continuing with it :)
| kvarsha chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
| Cared chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
This was one of my favourites in the contest and I voted for it.
I'm delighted that you are going to continue it.
| eddiebell69 chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
Wow. This was SO fucking good. I loved it. So much.
You guys rightfully won, man. I love how well-written it is, and how its eroticism is so palpable without being vulgar.
I seriously don't know what else to say without sounding like an ass-kissing bitch. Seriously.
Oh, one thing: you owe a pair of clean undies. Js.
PS. I see you executing your death plans for me. Haha! ;)
| buffbronze chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
This was fantastic and very hot and strangely romantic. I'm thrilled you'll be continuing this!
| DinaMakoid chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
OMGGGGGGGGG, That was fan"freaking"tastic! Girls, what a great job! I loevd it from the first word to the last. You deserved FIRST PLACE without a doubt. SOOOOOOOOOO HOTTTTTTTTTTT
| cherryhilz chapter 1 . 5/9/2013