Reviews for The After Effect
Brandon m chapter 5 . 9/12/2016
Please who is the boy? I need to know! These stories( this and it's prequel) are amazing and beautifully written!
Kate chapter 5 . 5/9/2016
You should keep updating. This story is really interesting. And eventually you could draw connection between Kakashi's team when they have to go on missions. That would be awesome.
Guest chapter 5 . 4/23/2016
"Harmoni no mura" - Village of Harmony
(Same idea as before, a joining together of nations as well as the harmony that they share)
Guest chapter 5 . 4/23/2016
Other suggestions could be...

"Shizen no mura" - Village of Nature
(Reference to the fact that the kids are all from different nations but combine to form 'nature' could also reference the fact that they 'survived' together)
Guest chapter 5 . 4/23/2016
Village name suggestion...

"Hai no mura" - Village of Ashes
(Referencing Naruto's home country as well aad the saying 'one rises from the ashes', could also design the village hitai-ate to resemble a Phoenix)

"Haruno-mura" - Village of Spring
(Referencing renewal, escape from something or to appear. Could also reference where it is hidden - near water springs/ underground/ in the land of spring etc - or the season)

"Kisetsu no mura" - Village of Seasons
(Referencing previous suggestion, 'the changing of the seasons' and the group as a whole)
Matt chapter 1 . 2/14/2016
Are you going to make more if so do it please I love this story it like the ultimate fanfic so please make more chapters
thebestoftherest chapter 5 . 2/3/2016
Good story please continue.
im.not.creative.with.names chapter 5 . 2/2/2016
awesome. can't wait to see more.
blukmage19r2 chapter 5 . 1/29/2016
Oh come now. Don't tell us you've given the story already? I'm getting rather excited to see what happens to the misfit village.
DragonClanMaster chapter 5 . 1/26/2016
Love it
Idris2000 chapter 1 . 10/29/2015
Very good sequel. Hope to see more about this.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/28/2015
i would like yakumo to join also shino aburame make it he is isolated cause of his bugs but most of all sasuke should join his story fits and he could use the family to get rid of his revenge in time also the village they make should be a revival of uzushiogakure
Bloody9000 chapter 5 . 8/18/2015
plz update soon
Guest chapter 5 . 7/21/2015
please continue the story!
John chapter 5 . 7/13/2015
Karin join the group right ? She good at cencor
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