|Reviews for Cruel Fate, Kind Destiny|
| Anisax chapter 30 . 7/26
WoooooW, really amazing story so far.
Can't wait till the next chapter gets released!
Your writing style is totally awesome and easy to read.
THIS story is exciting!
Keep up your wonderful work!
Cya next time!
| Guest chapter 13 . 7/19
Hah! I see what you did there about Hinata not supposing to be a shinobi. Well placed bud. Well placed.
| akdevan98 chapter 18 . 7/19
I have to say I'm surprised that this story isn't listed higher in the favorites search category. I got lucky and found it through another author's favorites list. I'm on chp. 18 and am blown away by the quality of writing you show. This is a Really well done story, so far, definitely up there with authors like kenichi618. So, just wanted to say, please keep doing what your doing, you awesome person.
| DarksiderForever chapter 18 . 7/9
:) 12hrs eyh... Stamina!
| marquis.shax chapter 4 . 7/9
ok again you're acting like a fucking idiot with no god damn clue as to how things work in the Naruto world. do you SERIOUSLY believe that anybody would buy that Sasuke defeated Mizuki and that NOBODY felt the spike of the Kyubi chakra and that people like the Hokage or any of the Jonin or Anbu such as Kakashi and Tenzo/Yamato WOULDN'T COME RUNNING WHEN THEY FELT THAT SPIKE? Fuck I swear if you don't get it together soon and actually ACT like you KNOW shit then you should just give up writing
| marquis.shax chapter 3 . 7/9
ok seriously are you an IDIOT? THE WHOLE POINT OF NARUTO USING THE KAGE BUNSHIN (Aside from having to much chakra to do a normal one) IS HIS LACK OF CONTROL A KAGE BUNSHIN DOESN'T REQUIRE CONTROL IT'S MORE OR LESS A BRUTE FORCE TECHNIQUE RATHER THAN A FINESSE TECHNIQUE LIKE THE NORMAL BUNSHIN. If Naruto already had reserves the size of Kakashi he should've been able to make a few Kage Bunshins easily. I swear you act like you don't know the difference between Kage Bunshin and Bunshin. Kage Bunshin is CHAKRA INTENSIVE meaning it's PERFECT for Naruto where as Bunshin is MINIMAL Chakra meaning it's IMPOSSIBLE for Naruto to use. You also make it seem like Naruto WON'T be a ninjutsu expert because he has massive reserves which makes you seem like even more of a fucking idiot. His reserves DON'T HOLD HIM BACK THEY HELP HIM HE CAN USE MORE POWERFUL TECHNIQUES MORE OFTEN THAN ANYBODY ELSE FOR LONGER PERIODS OF TIME MAKING HIM THE ABSOLUTE PERFECT NINJUTSU SPECIALIST
| marquis.shax chapter 2 . 7/9
ok you've really gone and contradicted yourself in the previous chapter you said that Naruto's heritage was known and yet this chapter it's clear that it's not otherwise Hiashi wouldn't act that way towards Naruto considering he'd know that not only is Naruto the son of the yondaime but also the son of the princess of whirlpool Kushina Uzumaki and that would make him a blood relative to the Senju clan which means Naruto is from a far more noble clan than the Hyuga clan. Another thing is while I don't like Hiashi the man isn't stupid he and the rest of the Hyuga wouldn't say that Naruto is the demon he holds as their eyes and their own limited knowledge on sealing could easily tell them that. In fact in canon had it been known about Naruto's heritage I'm sure the Hyuga elders and possibly even Hiashi would've actually encouraged Hinata to befriend him due to the fact that his heritage could possibly bring their clan to an even higher standing
| marquis.shax chapter 1 . 7/9
how was nobody knowing Naruto's heritage aside from Kakashi, the Council of morons (the elders), Jiraiya and the Hokage a plot hole? It was kept from everyone to keep Naruto safe as there were people from Iwa and possibly Kumo who would've either tried to kidnap or kill Naruto due to the fox or due to his father. While I doubt Onoki would've actually sanctioned an assassination attempt on Naruto there were likely a lot of butt hurt idiots in Iwa who would go rogue as they would think killing a dead mans son would be a form of revenge on him and then Kumo well they'd tried to kidnap Kushina due to the fox AND her special chakra so what's to stop them from doing the same to Naruto. Also you screwed up the Kage Bunshin just because a person doesn't have enough chakra to do it doesn't mean nothing will happen if they attempt it as they're still using the chakra for it so they'd end up with chakra exhaustion or possibly dead from trying it
| DarksiderForever chapter 2 . 7/8
| Guest chapter 30 . 7/3
OMG. so glad you're back ! This chapter is everything and more.
| RyoshiMorino chapter 30 . 6/30
This is an excellent story. Looking forward to more.
| Roxie.88 chapter 29 . 6/29
Great chapter but I think naruto needs to learn to be not so nice when he is competing even if they are friends
| Roxie.88 chapter 25 . 6/29
Freaking awesome! Sad that naruto was missing for 3 weeks but man I guess the hirashin Is really tricky. Although I love that he got a Phoenix contract but my question is will sasuke and hinata also get contracts? And of so what animal?
| mundanebeast chapter 30 . 6/28
Obito made an early play...nice
| Roxie.88 chapter 19 . 6/28
So tsunade is coming into the story. But will she come back? Will she take hinats under her wing? Will sasuke find out about his brother going after naruto? Love the story!