Reviews for Her Fathers' Sins
Yla chapter 23 . 9/7/2016
Ahh. That was a quick and good story. Thanks for sharing!
seireidoragon chapter 23 . 7/15/2015
This was a wonderful story and I really enjoyed reading it!
NillyNarwhal chapter 23 . 3/19/2014
I love this. I've kind of wondered about the other apprentices.
That Girl chapter 23 . 7/5/2013
Ahhhh! I love it! So good! Well written, fascinating story idea, followed the characters well, so very enjoyable. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story!
sillysammijo chapter 23 . 6/8/2013
Wonderful story! Was a joy to read!
Shimmerbreeze chapter 23 . 6/5/2013
Sequel! Sequel!
FalseFacts chapter 23 . 5/19/2013
As one last review for this story I have to say that you did a really good job with this story. I mean, yes, it could have been longer and more detailed but people have already said that a bit much and you had some great lines here.
Nice one :)
FalseFacts chapter 17 . 5/19/2013
Oh Hughes, you're such a dear thing :D
FalseFacts chapter 14 . 5/19/2013
Okay, let me rephrase that: Eastwood is a creepy pedophile/attempted rapist.

Now back to the story. I need a good disturbing tale.
FalseFacts chapter 12 . 5/19/2013
Eastwood is a creepy little fucker. Lol
FalseFacts chapter 8 . 5/19/2013
Hey now we've both writen a Riza has a stalker story! It's not hard to believe, though. She's perfect! Absolutely flawless!

I like the story too ;)
FalseFacts chapter 7 . 5/19/2013
Mustang, Oh Mustang.
When will he learn? Riza is a BAMF, she can help herself just fine.
FalseFacts chapter 4 . 5/19/2013
OOOoOoooOh Dra-ma! :)
FalseFacts chapter 3 . 5/19/2013
(just started reading this)
Wow that Eastwood is a bit of a prick. I can't quite explain why but I adore that last line.
"like a whore to her master's bed"

Very nice. Rude as fuck on Eastwood's part but I like it.
Akatsuki-Metal chapter 23 . 5/19/2013
this story was awesome keep up the good work
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