Reviews for A Party In Usagi's Pants
Thatoneblackchick chapter 1 . 10/28/2013
O0O theirs a party in my basement too;)(as in a real basement not like that!-/o/-)
Ros-Poz2 chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
Cuz that's how yaoi couples spend their summer! XD
SuzukiChiyeko chapter 1 . 5/15/2013
Haha, this was cute xD Akihiko is such a perv!
Nice one-shot. It was fun to read :)
Guest chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
HahahahaXD The mental images this put in my head. Please keep writing it was very entertaining.
IcePrincess chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
First things first. Change your summary for the story. Not all of it, just the last bit. If you're negitive to yourself others will be negitive to you and they probably won't read your story if even the author thinks it sucks. I read it because I used to be this person. Bringing my work down without letting anyone else read it first.
Now. . . This is good. Short. But good. You could elaborate more. Give us some imagery but that's something to work on for your next story. Build up. And then keep building. Keep climbing. Because I'm sure you could be a really great writer one day if you really wanted too.
Love
Icy
shungiku-chan chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
This has a good humour. Haha, I found myself laughing at the title of your work.

良い仕事。ありがとうございます。
Emo-Die-Kaninchen chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
OMG! My freaking jaw dropped! Nicely done, not many people can do that!