|Reviews for The Undying|
| GamerGirl54321 chapter 1 . 6/12/2014
My God, that was... Wow. I don't know whether to call it horrifying or beautiful. Maybe both...?
| xXFrostKittenXx chapter 1 . 6/11/2014
Well, now we know why the Endermen look so angry when you stare at them, don't we? o.o
I'm glad he was able to be at peace with everything in the end-that-is-not-an-end, though.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/24/2014
And that, my friends is why you never eat random flowers off the ground.
| The Foundry Cove chapter 1 . 5/21/2014
| Willy Dubs the Awesome chapter 1 . 4/21/2014
Awesome story. Never knew minecraft could be so deep.
| NotPaul chapter 1 . 1/22/2014
I love this story a lot, and how you write it.
I love it so much.
| woohooman14 chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
wow. That was a beautiful short story. It is interesting to imagine how another species views us humans. Similarly, how we would view an alien race if we found one. Thanks for a nice little read to boost my spirits!
| Slick146 chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
kinds suicidal, but okay
| TheLightSpectrum chapter 1 . 5/16/2013
That was amazing. Endermen are awesome and you just put a whole new perspective on them. bravo!
| spark n' Jetz chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
Oh my god. That was just utterly, quoting HPE24, amazing. Are you done with it? Because that was awesome. Good job man.
So you're sort switching between 1st 2nd and third person. Well I think. I'll rate this my third favorite story.
I love playing the hunt, where I spawn many endermen in a huge water cage, and then have them chase me, but I will never do that again.
Salute to the endermen, and their translator EXB. Somebody finally understands them. And wandergirl108.
| EclipseWolf64 chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
I find this the most philosophical thing I've ever read. I wonder what inspired it? Maybe, when the writers of FFN have families of their own, they'll read their fanfics to their kids. And the kids would ask, "One more chapter, please?" every time they'd stop at the end of one. Where there are ends, there are beginnings, and this has captured that well.
| Ma-yo-soul chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
You would think that the humans would find a cure for the endless sleep body thing and test it on yeshim since he is immortal but his "life" as some would call it would still be a small little dot on a massive timeline as were the humans time
| hpe24 chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
Oh wow. Just read this in school, and I'm utterly mind-blown. You really have talent for writing deep stories. XD This is like, the most serious and meaningful oneshot I've ever read. Very interesting to see from a non-human creature's view, too. :) Although I was quite shocked when the Enderman swore, I have to admit. Still, MEAN HUMANS I SAY but then, that's what we do when we find new specimens. ANYWAY, the point is, it's so smart how you thought of an Enderman understanding the meaning of life by going through terrible experiences but meeting a happy ending. :D Well done, man. You deserve some applause. *CLAP CLAP CLAP CLAP* AND TAKE SOME VIRTUAL COOKIES