|Reviews for Hold Me Whilst I Sleep|
| Jessie Deal chapter 1 . 11/14
Yes, it's predictable. But I still cried. So you did well. Very well.
| Toodleoo chapter 1 . 10/22
This gutted me.
| HelenaRickman1 chapter 1 . 5/27
Oh my goodness, Tyche, I am covered in tears. Only 500 words and my heart is broken. How do you do this?
| Clarine chapter 1 . 4/1
Terrible et magnifique...
| jensteed chapter 1 . 3/3
This was absolutely heartbreaking, so dark and bleak but beautiful in its own way.
| Born in 20th Century chapter 1 . 2/18
*sniffs* beautifully written, I loved the emotions poured into this, can't describe it.
| Kurai Ummei chapter 1 . 11/27/2014
D: no fair! You aren't allowed to make people tear up with such a small handful of words!
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/30/2014
Such angst, much heartbreak, so wow. :)
Your writing is... Spectacular, wonderful, brilliant!
Simple sentences, but they covey so much meaning in what was said and unsaid. The could-have-beens leave a bitter sweet aftertaste. And both Snape and hermoine were so tragically and beautifully portrayed... Argh. I almost couldn't stand it.
| centava chapter 1 . 10/23/2014
Sniff sniff...wow. This was heartbreaking.
| cloudshape to ennien chapter 1 . 7/22/2014
Loved it. Awfully sad, but brilliantly written. And both are so very IC - that's the best about. Has the war gone differently, this might have really been the outcome.
| BernerMom chapter 1 . 4/18/2014
So sad, yet so beautiful.
| Lunaticflower chapter 1 . 12/28/2013
Amazing bit of fiction! You show a sliver of humanity and compassion in a very cruel world. Very well done :)
| lcsayuri chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
Oh my... this is so short and simple and simply heartbreaking. Great job!
| Mione21 chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
Oh, this is good... sad and moving.
| catsgotmytongue chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
oh my God...