Reviews for Stuck in a World of Fiction
EdenAngel7 chapter 5 . 1/9
My dad was in the military. His mouth was what kept him from rising in the ranks before he left. Then again, he also had the misfortune of having idiots, morons and jackasses as commanding officers.

To the sarcastic smart cookies in the world,
EdenAngel7
SomeDudeThatReads chapter 71 . 11/18/2017
This was a great read, and I hope that the second is anywhere near as good. I'd say more, but I want to get to the sequel as quickly as possible.
SomeDudeThatReads chapter 7 . 11/15/2017
I'm actually really looking forward to how Wrex and Bourne get along. I can see it going one of two ways. The first being that they get along swimmingly based on the fact that Bourne, on the outside at least, is almost a human "krogan". The second is that they clash constantly because there is only enough room for one biotic badass aboard the Normandy.
RIOSHO chapter 39 . 11/3/2017
LMAO that moment when the ship ousted him and they all have a slow moment
Agastopia chapter 1 . 8/31/2017
You have very poor naming skills.
Arkraiththeepicbrony chapter 46 . 6/22/2017
"Man, Iron is evil" i think, as I hope Ashley dies so Jason can get with tali instead
Arkraiththeepicbrony chapter 41 . 6/22/2017
Why not leave deactivated biotic restraints on, give everyone a remote for them, and If he ever goes crazy they can deactivate his biotics
Arkraiththeepicbrony chapter 35 . 6/22/2017
I lost two colonists in the game because I ran out of grenades and didnt know you could knock them out
Arkraiththeepicbrony chapter 2 . 6/21/2017
Some of the things in this are so ridiculously funny. "Raptor" XD. "We can take them out of were smart about this, you go left ill go right"
zeek17 chapter 31 . 5/22/2017
2 weeks - two
3 more - three
You don't think - Do you think
50 years - fifty
3 minutes - three
12 hours - twelve
Challenge expected - accepted
black listed - blacklisted
We're sure - are we sure
help you Akuze - in Akuze
zeek17 chapter 29 . 5/22/2017
You trying - Are you trying
20-200 - 20-20
3 steps - three
50 years - fifty
zeek17 chapter 28 . 5/22/2017
Cabin? Shouldn't it be called suite?
20 times - twenty
2 billion - two
Raptor and I - me and Raptor
you really speak to - should speak
their mako - Mako
than it would - then
lead the ninja thing - leave
Shepard or I - me
zeek17 chapter 26 . 5/22/2017
surprised by the surprised by the - phrase doubled
4 of them - four
8 ways - eight
than kill him - then
zeek17 chapter 25 . 5/22/2017
in 20 seconds - twenty
8 days, 8 years - eight
told them too - told them to
exacts words - exact
to Liara and I - and me
zeek17 chapter 24 . 5/21/2017
then she'd been - than
You trying to convince - Are you
fast enough that time - this time, this one
then consider - than
of the same people - person
other 2 games - two
10 seconds - ten
3 minutes - three
better then - than
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