|Reviews for Crossroads|
| fuz chapter 33 . 3/12
This was perfect!
| sujari6 chapter 33 . 3/12
Things are starting to look up for them.
| dazzleglo chapter 33 . 3/12
This was a great time line of things, loved how it all came together and it is so real that it would take that long to get a business going in another country as things don't happen overnight and the way you laid it out was excellent. LOL of course Bella was wanting a baby once she saw Edward with Alicia in his arms.
| mandy7 chapter 33 . 3/12
Is there any hope for Carlisle?
| jansails chapter 33 . 3/12
When I first began reading the ins & outs of the visa process, I was like, "Wait a dadburn minute!"
Edward & Jasper's odds of being accepted by the Aussies were just that much greater being non-felony, non-diseased, fiscally solid with ample assets seeking immigrants, prepared to set up a business & buy property in their country.
So the first part was kind of a waste of paragraphs & emotional energy- to me anyway- others' may feel differently.
Glad Esme's divorce came through smoothly.
| Mireads chapter 33 . 3/12
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| cullenmeadow chapter 33 . 3/12
Thanks for this chapter, great suspense! :)
| Guest chapter 33 . 3/11
In Australia unless it's an independent uni most excellence letters are small. I was convinced I hadn't gotten in but I did. The info pacts you get once you accept are big though
| Maplestyle chapter 33 . 3/11
Loved this, though I do have to admit I had my doubts for a minute that they'd get those visas you tricky little thing! Can't wait for more.
| dreamerwaking1 chapter 1 . 3/4
What a great start. The prologue really highlights the Edward and Bella's controlling and domineering family background, their low self opinions and insecurities. They have no clue who they really are, except that they're the products of their parents making.
I loved too the characters you've chosen for everyone. Emmett makes such a great ocker Aussie and bunking him in with Edward, so pristine in everything he does is no doubt going to create a few interesting, if not, funny scenes.
No doubt they each have their issues or they wouldn't been at this Aussie camp. I can't wait to find out what they are and how it changes them.
Fantastic start :)
| grabadietcoke chapter 32 . 3/1
I love her getting up on her feet. Starting over and taking action and disposing of the toxic life.
| sujari6 chapter 32 . 2/28
Good for Esme.