|Reviews for Free-Form One Shots|
| medella chapter 2 . 7/2/2013
Wow, that was . . . interesting.
I have an inherent love for angst, so I felt that these free-forms were beautiful, albeit a tiny bit difficult to understand.
I love the commentary in each free-form, as well as the expressive emotions. It's not often I find writing that renders me incoherent, but this was a very enjoyable read. You have an eloquent style that evokes vivid imagery so I applaud you for that - seeing as these were so short.
This has a lot of potential! I can't wait to see what you'll put up next. :) Perhaps one about Leo observing Frank and Hazel from a distance, wishing he had what they had? I can never resist some good ol' Lazel angst, lol.
| Anonymouse chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
Interesting, please write more!
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
Hey, it's really nice! But I would appreciate it if you make the text a little more clearer and readable. Or else, you should completely continue it! And how about Calypso reflecting on Percy and Annabeth's relationship?