|Reviews for Falling in Love at a Coffee Shop|
| 23CR3T chapter 3 . 12/4/2013
Awwwww, love the GerIta there!-de chi!
| Landon Donovan chapter 1 . 12/3/2013
| Israelle ParadiseIsis Hypnosis chapter 3 . 6/9/2013
Will wait for the next one!
| Israelle ParadiseIsis Hypnosis chapter 2 . 5/14/2013
Sounds like a fun story!
I like it so far, it's well written exception made for a few mistakes (but who am I kidding, my English is not good enough for me to be allowed to judge...)
Anyways, will be looking forward to the next chapter!
| hiya-exclamationpoint chapter 2 . 5/14/2013
Wow, this is actually pretty good, first story or not! My grammar nazi-ish side is fairly satisfied as well :) Plus, you kept the characters pretty in character. Maybe instead of breaking with "Alfred POV, Arthur POV", you could just stick a line break or something? It's in third person so I don't think you really need to say whose point of view the part's in. (I'm no expert, though, so you can do whatever, if you want.) I hope you update soon-ish, and maybe with a longer chapter?
| Lwuzhere chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
Update. Soon. Please. Thank you. Gracias. Grazie.
| TheRedFlowerOfFire chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
Yes! You should definitely continue the story.
I loved it!
| FluffyWhitePandas chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
YES! CONTINUE THIS! :3 sorry that was soo good! :D anyways good job :3
| Muthafuking fangirl desu chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
You should continue :D
| saski300 chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
Yes. You should continue this. And Update a.s.a.p ;)
| JulietGivesUp chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
Yes, do continue it! Alfred seems to be quite the devious man. Loving it! :D
| RoxanneTheGreat chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
Yeah. Add an possessive France to