Reviews for The Element of Time
Animeworld2.0 chapter 5 . 11/3
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Planar-Walking-Entertainment chapter 123 . 10/26
Hell of a fight... and even when Sasuke broke him and his brother free of the curse, Madara still is a viable vessel for Indra; as he's still full of Hatred.
The Dude Himself chapter 31 . 8/26
I like the concept of the story, but there are many issues I have as well:

Characters feel to bland or one dimensional

The concept of time travel and the stipulations of sharing/restoring memories of the past are confusing but also don’t make a lot of sense. I mean, we are restoring the minds of people who are not likely going to help (Shika, Haku, and Zabuza) as well as restored Tsunade’s memories but not Jirayia’s or Minato’s? Where fo we draw the line?

I liked the premise of the story but it just had a few major issues that I didnt like.

5/10
Phantom-ssj chapter 138 . 6/13
NEED MORE Chapters i just caught up
GreatAxel chapter 70 . 5/13
The fourth Kazekage's official name is Rasa
Guest chapter 1 . 4/16
I can't even read more than one line
Derick Lewis chapter 138 . 12/11/2023
Do you ever plan on finishing this fanfic.
Something Random 52 chapter 25 . 3/11/2023
Tom Riddle — Voldemort reference?!
Something Random 52 chapter 15 . 3/11/2023
The most surprising thing is that Hinata needs a shadow clone to help her form the rasengan, considering she’s supposed to have great control.
dastewie2012 chapter 56 . 12/23/2022
It’s rasa mate.
dastewie2012 chapter 19 . 12/22/2022
Sounds like all of them are just if the six paths had turned into individual clans
eugeozuberg3 chapter 1 . 9/1/2022
bwah 138 chapter?
Makuro767 chapter 5 . 6/9/2022
Should have added AU/AR and OP OC
Makuro767 chapter 2 . 6/9/2022
Okay. Felix is annoying. Just stick to Yoshoryuu
Makuro767 chapter 1 . 6/9/2022
Again, an OC whose name don't merge well with the written world... it's like people who make this OC don't even try. The least you could do is use a mostly Asian name than Latin. There is always equivalents of the same words in different languages.
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