|Reviews for The Element of Time|
| Guest chapter 47 . 7/20
Wait a minute ... Afraid of women, comes off as a jerk you based it on lon'qu didn't you :)
| Hello there chapter 53 . 7/13
Where is Hanabi?
| Nobody important chapter 107 . 7/13
On your profile, you said that there was a cap on 15 guest reviews per chapter. So 105 x 15 1575 guest reviews. You said that 2500 reviews have to be made before you continue the story. That means only 925 reviews have to be made on an account. If 9 reviewers reviewed each chapter that would fulfill the 925 required reviews. Tadah!
Seriously though. This fanfiction is amazing. Such a shame you havent updated though . As Deidara would say " It is truly a work of art, hn! "
| Meirai chapter 107 . 7/12
FINISH THIS OR I WILL MAKE YOU...
| jdogrules chapter 3 . 6/23
this story is so funy you sure know how lite it up
| Guest chapter 12 . 6/17
Chapter was awsome
| KingCrab-5D's-RivalGIII chapter 6 . 6/7
The academy teacher before Iuka that you were talking about is named Mizuki.
| trance dance chapter 14 . 6/3
Sasuke vs Sakura... now why this hadn't happened in canon ?
| trance dance chapter 12 . 6/1
And here I return to this story. I have to say that it was another good chapter. especially the part wher Naruto declars pranking war on Sasuke.
| The Fox Sage chapter 70 . 5/26
Garra's father already has a name, just lock at his wiki page in.i do have to comment that the elemental rasengan for lightning is impossible because lightning chakra can't be controlled to such a fine degree besides kakashi even failed when he attempted to create for your jutsu names for the rasengans, could you not put a Japanese word like rasen and put it together with a english word like nonetheless this is proving to be a good story.
Ps. Why is Suna apparently obseesed with making their weapons out of really expensive materials in your story? and personally Sasukes curse seal 2nd form looks good but i don't think it should have dragon wings maybe instead give it raven birdlike wings
-The Fox Sage
| Jronese chapter 25 . 5/21
I don't know what will happen i am chapter 25. But shouldn't they be able to get through obito if they let rin ressurect?
| warpterror chapter 8 . 5/18
If you want an ominous ending you should read "The boy in the team" by shadenight123 :) That is if you can bear through all the angst :P
| warpterror chapter 4 . 5/18
So what Konoha just let the matter drop? They should have demanded something from Kumo at the least...
| warpterror chapter 3 . 5/18
Good. Powerful villains... That is very good... mwahahaha :) You are already doing better than Third Fang.
| warpterror chapter 2 . 5/18
Ok it's good that Felix can't just outright interfere by fighting all the opponents early... However I have to ask - where exactly is the border on fighting and not fighting? Say Felix makes a weapon and that weapon is used to kill Madara? Or what if he trains someone who does it? Or does it only count when either physical contact is made or chakra comes in to contact? What if he poisons a whole field of wheat part of which will later be used to make a loaf of bread which will then be eaten by one of Naruto's enemies? What if his presence in the altered timeline changes things on a quantum level such that One of Naruto's enemies dies through an accident?(however unlikely that is) Also what if HE is the one who was forced to engage in combat against one of them? Is all that Madara has to do is just throw one punch at Felix and reality reforms itself back to cannon?