Reviews for Shame
Shaaaaame chapter 10 . 12/16/2020
The biggest shame is you not finishing writing this story...but it kinda writes itself from here: Angela recovers, Jacob tells her about Edward's affair, Angela leaves Edward, Aro fails Bella, Jacob fails Bella, and Edward accidentally knocks her up. They name the kid Seamus, which is pronounced "shay-mus". ;P
Guest chapter 10 . 12/16/2020
i hate this bella
KDMCAM chapter 9 . 8/14/2020
I would be so very happy is this was finished one day!
imciara97 chapter 10 . 6/15/2020
God how i loved this uncompleted fic! would have liked to know what happened to those two. It was really great and i hope u can find the time, will and inspiration to complete it. If not just know that it was a pleasure to read it till this point so thank u.
stoptherain20 chapter 10 . 4/26/2020
I can’t believe I just got into this story and it hasn’t updated in 6 years I need more
shannon30033 chapter 10 . 8/5/2019
Well, since you haven't updated in5 years, I'm gonna assume this is done. I think that Angela would have recovered, and left Edward! Taking her second chance at life without Edward. Taking all her newfound gratefulness an dshoving it away. Bella would find no closure with Aro, just revealing more of her childhood abandonment issues. Jacob is a tough one. He is totally devoted to Bella. He would not leave gracefully. Bella would have
to dismiss him or give him an ultimatum after he tried to something desperate and tell Angela. Bella and E might get pregnant as last time there was no condom and he would stay home and watch the kid and plant the vegetable garden while she ruled the financial world and he ruled the bedroom.

There. Thoughts?
shannon30033 chapter 3 . 8/5/2019
Oh my. What is E going too do.
shannon30033 chapter 1 . 8/5/2019
Thanks! Great chapter. cant wait to see how it all plays out.
Guest chapter 10 . 2/1/2019
Wandering. Depressing. Hard to follow. No thanks.
Team BellEd chapter 10 . 8/7/2017
Please please please update again I beg you. I understand how Bella feels. Her feelings and facade. I teared up the last few chapters. My heart tugged every time I read it. Please at least give us how this'll end, pretty please.
KDMCAM chapter 10 . 8/4/2017
I wish u could finish this! This is AMAZING!
Cool bananas chapter 10 . 7/23/2017
...it would be great to see a conclusion of sorts...
But after 3 years in supposing you've moved on, and rightly so...but it would still be great to see where these two end up...
Thanks again!
Plus, I wanted you to hit 1k!
Cool bananas chapter 9 . 7/23/2017
This story is so...intriguing alright!
A true study of human behaviour...for free!?
Thanks so much!
Cool bananas chapter 8 . 7/23/2017
He's stepping up...
The dialogue you've written is so true though about the differences between perceptions and reality between the sexes...
Riveting-thanks!
Cool bananas chapter 7 . 7/23/2017
"The world was on fire and no one could save me but you.
It's strange what desire will make foolish people do.
What a wicked game you play to make me feel this way.
What a wicked thing to do, to let me dream of you.
What a wicked thing to say, you never felt this way.
What a wicked thing to do, to make me dream of you..."
I'm quoting song lyrics?!
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