Reviews for Shame
ChristyWIX chapter 9 . 7/29/2013
Your words just break my heart in this story. I am hanging on here, because I just adore all of your work, your writing. It is so very hard for me to hang on though. This is a very sad and angsty tale . . . my heart hurts to read it. I keep having hopes and expectations that you make it better. Perhaps your heading us on to no HEA. Actually . . . I don't see how they could have an HEA at this point. Perhaps it will come out in the future on how they can have one. I just want Edward happy at this point. Everyone, and I mean everyone in his life is using him for one thing or another and he can't escape. I'm surprised he is holding on. Again, holding on here . . . but it hurts.
Christy
sulliedsoles chapter 9 . 7/29/2013
I am loving this fic. The way e & b keep taking each other by surprise, the smut (of course!), and especially how it pulls at my heart for poor e. can't wait to keep reading!
Guest chapter 9 . 7/29/2013
Very intense. I am looking forward to other chapters.
alisapay1 chapter 9 . 7/29/2013
Edward is struggling so hard but I think he got thru to Bella a little bit. I'm glad they both got what they wanted... Thanks for writing this for us for free! I appreciate it so much! Mwah!
bon123 chapter 9 . 7/29/2013
This is definitely not what you can call 'light' reading material. This is one disturbing, gut wrenching fic. Your writing however is sooooo clever, it's beautiful. I love it.
DawnsWhimsy chapter 9 . 7/29/2013
How do I say this without sounding horrible? His family need to get off their asses and help themselves out instead of relying on him for everything. Oh and truly this part is without malice but just let Angela die she will be way better off and so will Edward rather he thinks so right now or not. She never really loved him anyway and she hasn't been a real wife in a long, long time.
jamiwood chapter 9 . 7/28/2013
I love your writing I love this story and can't wait for the next update sooo good!
nitammi chapter 9 . 7/28/2013
Tragic. Things will never be the same. This is a brave story and I am soaking it up but feel guilty just the same.
SLKerouac chapter 9 . 7/28/2013
Who has the upper hand Bella? or Edward? Bella feels that she can demand things from Edward but he has the control to a point. He knows that what he feels he is doing is for Angela but is it really? Edward wants to please everyone. He feels that it is his duty to take care of the family. He is trying to do right with Angela. He goes along with what Bella wants to a point. He takes control over what he can. After the night he comes home to where his mother is watching Angela. His mother knows something is going on but has not asked him about it. Edward does not want anyone to know what he is doing. He feels ashamed but feels that this is his only way out at this time. He loves Angela and she would be so hurt if she only knew what he was doing. He just heads off to his own room. Now he will be able to get Angela to a specialist for her cancer. Will something happen at this doctors appointment? Will they be able to help Angela? Will they just confirm that there is nothing that can be done now? That it has progressed too far? Will Esme start to figure out what is going on? Will she talk with Edward about what he is doing? Next chapter!
katinki chapter 9 . 7/28/2013
Interesting, interesting, interesting. Part of me is very angry with Edward, much more so for giving in and enjoying these trysts than the fact that he's selling his body to help cure his wife. That enjoyment is more of a betrayal than anything, I think. I'm curious when, if, and how this house of cards comes tumbling down. I'm enjoying this story and your writing is a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing.
Nannyjojo chapter 9 . 7/28/2013
I think Edward is right. Isabella doesn't know what she wants. Not really.
They seem to be pushing each others buttons to get what they want.
So looking forward to seeing where this will go.
the real teach chapter 9 . 7/28/2013
gotta little more insight. thx
rubyblue9696 chapter 9 . 7/28/2013
another fantastic chapter...it wonderfully exhausting reading and absorbing these two...thank you...

xxx jess
fuzzyltlwingedthing chapter 9 . 7/28/2013
I love how Edwards is coming to life one tiny spark at a time. I also think you're doing a masterful job of third person narrative. Sometimes (in ff) it sounds so stilted.
Alice's White Rabbit chapter 9 . 7/27/2013
"So many rational and ethical answers present themselves to that he cannot calmly explain the fabric of moral society to the naked woman across from him. It is as if these reasons simply do not exist inside the small space of the limousine. They do not exist between Isabella Swan and her friend Jacob Black. Edward understands that he has willfully wandered into another reality where the rules of physics and philanthropy do not hold. Unease works its way underneath his skin and he feels as if he might choke on unholy, recycled air." Loved this description of Edward's thoughts about the whole situation he is currently in. Very philosophical of him.

I find it extremely sad that neither Edward nor Bella has been happy in more than 5 years. So sad. And, I keep wondering which will falter first in this strange arrangement of theirs.

Thanks!

Sally
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