|Reviews for Shame|
| Cool bananas chapter 8 . 7/23/2017
He's stepping up...
The dialogue you've written is so true though about the differences between perceptions and reality between the sexes...
| Cool bananas chapter 7 . 7/23/2017
"The world was on fire and no one could save me but you.
It's strange what desire will make foolish people do.
What a wicked game you play to make me feel this way.
What a wicked thing to do, to let me dream of you.
What a wicked thing to say, you never felt this way.
What a wicked thing to do, to make me dream of you..."
I'm quoting song lyrics?!
| Cool bananas chapter 6 . 7/23/2017
Fun & games all around...Not!
| Cool bananas chapter 5 . 7/23/2017
She's a MANEATER! Lol!
| Cool bananas chapter 4 . 7/23/2017
| Cool bananas chapter 3 . 7/23/2017
HELLO! She's a cold hearted snake alright!
Far out! & ruthless...but that can be human nature...
| Cool bananas chapter 2 . 7/23/2017
I'm sad for them...probably because you can guarantee that somewhere in the world this is someone's reality...
I appreciate what you do!
| Cool bananas chapter 1 . 7/23/2017
It's seems freaky & with a hard edge alright!
| Guest chapter 10 . 7/13/2017
What a wonderful tale. I'm just sorry it won't be completed :(
| robchris chapter 10 . 7/8/2017
I quite enjoy your writings, are you ever going to finish this?
| exclusiverob chapter 10 . 7/1/2017
I really wish you would finish this story, Please
| Taschen chapter 1 . 5/12/2017
I really like this story. It's it's different and enigmatic, mysterious and twisted. And dark. And fucked up, but with a vague glimmer for potential redemption alighting on the darkness. I like the psychological obsession that is ramping up. We don't really know what is motivating the characters yet, not entirely, but I am intrigued to find out.
Obviously we're not supposed to know what drives them yet, as we wait for the mystery and psychological drama to unfold, so the reviews here claiming it's stupid because they don't get it and don't buy it are clearly simple-minded.
Please keep weaving this dark, twisted, intriguing yarn! This story could be so great!
| Czar on Lyfe Conflicts chapter 1 . 2/20/2017
| jk chapter 10 . 1/16/2017
like Edwards dick is worth back and forth airfare to Arizona once a week? LOL if I was him id be soooo fucking embarrassed to ask for that much! plus hotel, plus a car, plus paying for doctor visits...jeezzzzzz...hes not worth anywhere near that! not even fucking close!
| jk chapter 8 . 1/16/2017
I really don't understand why bella is willing to pay SOOO MUCH MONEY for Edward fumbling...theres NOTHING sexy about this Edward...and I wouldn't pay him $1 to fuck me.