Reviews for Shame
Erikajo chapter 8 . 7/6/2013
Yowza! That was fun. :)
Mom23xx chapter 8 . 7/6/2013
Amazing!
Nannyjojo chapter 8 . 7/6/2013
Wow.
Edward is pushing her buttons.
Looking forward to more
xoHunnyxBunnyxo chapter 8 . 7/5/2013
A little fore shadowing us Bella Hong to due in the end. I don't remember if you said this will be a happy ending.
Unimaginative Olena chapter 8 . 7/5/2013
You made this chapter so visual, it was like I were sitting there with them!

Naughty, naughty Edward! :)

I wonder if she wants to fuck him in the car while Jacob's driving it. Jacob would surely love that LOL

Olena
blueeyes11354 chapter 8 . 7/5/2013
And the night has only just begun it seems.
Nicffwhisperer chapter 8 . 7/5/2013
You write the most intelligent stories and while I may not be smart enough to figure out all the clues, I'm enjoying the ride.
ChristyWIX chapter 8 . 7/5/2013
As Edward gets his confidence/strength back slowly, I'm seeing Bella thaw very slightly at the same time. I'm beginning to understand more, where you are taking us in this journey of yours. I like it.
2old4fanfic chapter 8 . 7/5/2013
I feel the need to go to the opera...
obsmama chapter 8 . 7/5/2013
The visuals this chapter were by far the most superior yet and I didn't know you could top the chapters before. I felt the music and the silk. Your so amazing at showing us the scene. Beauty in all the savageness between them. I feel how carnal their desire for the other is.

xoxo
HopeStreet chapter 8 . 7/5/2013
Oh boy. Do people like her really exist? I think the answer could very well be a yes. If not to this degree, maybe to a lesser version.
TypoKween chapter 8 . 7/5/2013
Nice play with the silk ties and woven theme with the opera. Edward has serious potential and I hope Bella realizes that soon.
tracyluvstwilight2010 chapter 8 . 7/5/2013
Great chapter :) I can't wait to see what happens next, and where Bella is taking him.
dlhk chapter 8 . 7/5/2013
Excellent chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next, and where Bella is taking him.
rubyblue9696 chapter 8 . 7/5/2013
taciturn, ignominy, licentious...my favorite part was just two words: voluptuous uncertainty...lovely powerful chapter...thank you...

xxx jess
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