Reviews for Shame |
---|
![]() ![]() I'm sad for them...probably because you can guarantee that somewhere in the world this is someone's reality... I appreciate what you do! |
![]() ![]() It's seems freaky & with a hard edge alright! Thanks! |
![]() ![]() What a wonderful tale. I'm just sorry it won't be completed :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() I quite enjoy your writings, are you ever going to finish this? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really wish you would finish this story, Please |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story. It's it's different and enigmatic, mysterious and twisted. And dark. And fucked up, but with a vague glimmer for potential redemption alighting on the darkness. I like the psychological obsession that is ramping up. We don't really know what is motivating the characters yet, not entirely, but I am intrigued to find out. Obviously we're not supposed to know what drives them yet, as we wait for the mystery and psychological drama to unfold, so the reviews here claiming it's stupid because they don't get it and don't buy it are clearly simple-minded. Please keep weaving this dark, twisted, intriguing yarn! This story could be so great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great plot! |
![]() ![]() like Edwards dick is worth back and forth airfare to Arizona once a week? LOL if I was him id be soooo fucking embarrassed to ask for that much! plus hotel, plus a car, plus paying for doctor visits...jeezzzzzz...hes not worth anywhere near that! not even fucking close! |
![]() ![]() I really don't understand why bella is willing to pay SOOO MUCH MONEY for Edward fumbling...theres NOTHING sexy about this Edward...and I wouldn't pay him $1 to fuck me. |
![]() ![]() I hate getting involved in something that is not finished. If your not going to finish it take it off |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome Chapter I'm sitting here wanting more. HUGS |
![]() ![]() this is really confusing...I really don't understand why bella would WAY OVER PAY for sex from a guy that kinda hates her and loves his dying wife? I don't get it |
![]() ![]() as far as ive read so far...they've had sex twice and Edward hasn't given bella a orgasm ...so why in the fuck would she pay for angelas health care? that has to be VERY fucking expensive and I just don't think Edwards "Services" are worth the money |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, hope you are well. Rereading some of your story. Miss you. Hope you will get a chance to update your stories. Happy New Year! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. So meaty it's downright chunky! So much to chew over. Enough of the metaphors. You are one clever little wordsmith, weaving an uncomfortable spell. Cheers :) |