Reviews for Shame
Cool bananas chapter 2 . 7/23/2017
I'm sad for them...probably because you can guarantee that somewhere in the world this is someone's reality...
I appreciate what you do!
Cool bananas chapter 1 . 7/23/2017
It's seems freaky & with a hard edge alright!
Guest chapter 10 . 7/13/2017
What a wonderful tale. I'm just sorry it won't be completed :(
robchris chapter 10 . 7/8/2017
I quite enjoy your writings, are you ever going to finish this?
exclusiverob chapter 10 . 7/1/2017
I really wish you would finish this story, Please
Taschen chapter 1 . 5/12/2017
I really like this story. It's it's different and enigmatic, mysterious and twisted. And dark. And fucked up, but with a vague glimmer for potential redemption alighting on the darkness. I like the psychological obsession that is ramping up. We don't really know what is motivating the characters yet, not entirely, but I am intrigued to find out.

Obviously we're not supposed to know what drives them yet, as we wait for the mystery and psychological drama to unfold, so the reviews here claiming it's stupid because they don't get it and don't buy it are clearly simple-minded.

Please keep weaving this dark, twisted, intriguing yarn! This story could be so great!
Czar on Lyfe Conflicts chapter 1 . 2/20/2017
Great plot!
jk chapter 10 . 1/16/2017
like Edwards dick is worth back and forth airfare to Arizona once a week? LOL if I was him id be soooo fucking embarrassed to ask for that much! plus hotel, plus a car, plus paying for doctor visits...jeezzzzzz...hes not worth anywhere near that! not even fucking close!
jk chapter 8 . 1/16/2017
I really don't understand why bella is willing to pay SOOO MUCH MONEY for Edward fumbling...theres NOTHING sexy about this Edward...and I wouldn't pay him $1 to fuck me.
Elaine chapter 10 . 4/7/2016
I hate getting involved in something that is not finished. If your not going to finish it take it off
KareBear1965 chapter 10 . 3/12/2016
Awesome Chapter

I'm sitting here wanting more.

jk chapter 10 . 3/2/2016
this is really confusing...I really don't understand why bella would WAY OVER PAY for sex from a guy that kinda hates her and loves his dying wife? I don't get it
jk chapter 7 . 3/2/2016
as far as ive read so far...they've had sex twice and Edward hasn't given bella a orgasm why in the fuck would she pay for angelas health care? that has to be VERY fucking expensive and I just don't think Edwards "Services" are worth the money
elizabeth bennette chapter 9 . 12/28/2015
Hi, hope you are well. Rereading some of your story. Miss you. Hope you will get a chance to update your stories. Happy New Year!
1853kaz chapter 10 . 10/23/2015
Great story. So meaty it's downright chunky! So much to chew over. Enough of the metaphors. You are one clever little wordsmith, weaving an uncomfortable spell. Cheers :)
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