Reviews for Shame
CullensTwiMistress chapter 5 . 6/7/2013
Jesus. I don't even know what category to put Bella in.

Happy birthday!
Atinaread chapter 5 . 6/7/2013
Evil Bella! waiting more! ;) xoxo
lee21761 chapter 2 . 6/7/2013
Poor Edward! He has so much on his shoulders. Right now Bella looks like a big bitch right now but that is how it happens. When businesses make big cuts, they don't see the little employee that it affects. They look at the bigger picture. Saving the company or saving the profits. It happens all the time and Edward is just a little person in the business world...insignificant really. Like most of us are
Love to see where this is going to go
thanks
Fiyaaa chapter 5 . 6/7/2013
HAPPY BIRTHDAY LOVELY!
You've given us such an awesome present :)
Hot damn that was...

Have a lovely weekend :)
beckaboo924 chapter 5 . 6/7/2013
Wow! Hot I wonder what Bella wants. Domination or submission?

Happy birthday!
beckaboo924 chapter 4 . 6/7/2013
I have a feeling he will break down soon.
beckaboo924 chapter 3 . 6/7/2013
Wow Bella has no boundaries at all! I am actually happy Edward walked away even though I know he will be back someway or another. Gigoloward?
beckaboo924 chapter 2 . 6/7/2013
So I'm guessing Edward is the man Bella was watching on the security camera and layed off. Weird that she seems obsessed with him but wants him out. Maybe he is her weakness and she can't handle weakness? So sad that he has a dying wife at home. :( but his actions seem to receal thatdid he not love her in a deep love kind of way.
Iteachu4600 chapter 5 . 6/7/2013
happy birthday, First Bella is a heartless bitch and Edward let's his ego get in the way and is making him stupid. Secondly I'm wondering if Edward and Angela are really in love, yes they care deeply for one another and I'm sure he's heartbroken over the fact that she is dying but I get the feeling even when she was not ill there was no passion more of a comfortable relationship that they were together long enough that they took the next logical step.
BilliCullen chapter 5 . 6/7/2013
JESUS, BDC!
Harsh reality with benefits for Edward.
Bella is sick and twisted, I'm almost shamed by reading her...
Shame.
Damn girl, you're good!

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU...
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU...
HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR, BDC...
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!
motherbeatrice chapter 5 . 6/7/2013
well Happy Birthday! another Taurus...mine was 5/3. No wonder I love this story. WTF happened to Bella to make her like this Love it!
villanova chapter 5 . 6/7/2013
It's your birthday and you give us presents? Well Happy Birthday.
Wow, I think Edward has bitten more than he can chew.
Unimaginative Olena chapter 5 . 6/7/2013
Happy birthday!

I'm fascinated. Although the title is Shame, it seems to me that Bella is actually shameless ;)

Olena
PAWsPeaches chapter 5 . 6/7/2013
OH. MY. FUCK.

Bella turns her face toward the window and Edward is incensed. He is here. He is inside of her. He needs her attention. He hates her and he wants her and his life is shit and she won't even look at him. Edward surprises himself as he grabs Bella's jaw and forces her face back towards him and pushes her head firmly against the door.

"Look at me when I fuck you," he grunts.

You have killed me dead with "Look at me when I fuck you." Just OMF! And this game she has come up with? BRILLIANT! I love this- and this chapter KILLED IT! So good!

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
Letmesignman chapter 5 . 6/7/2013
I'm out of words right now and will come with proper review later but this story is something really unique in fandom so far. Thank you for that, and Happy Birthday! :)
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