|Reviews for The Army of Four|
| Guest chapter 15 . 7/27/2016
I was only looking up lore theories the other day and came across this. I have often imagined similar stories in my head but you have given a sort of life to all the characters and the world in which they live. I like the way you portray everything and everyone and how you show the slow decline into the world you see in-game. Miyazaki himself would struggle to write a better story, I will be reading your other stories.
| Sharkborg chapter 15 . 3/25/2015
Ok so I have read the hole book and in the end all of them need to fucking die; Ciaran by the CU artorias and ornstein killed themseves in battle Gough fuck up, hole shit, fuck lordan man, that place fucked up btw AWSOME WORK MAN I FKING LOVE IT :D
| R chapter 1 . 3/12/2015
Unexpected dick move on Ciaran's part.
Artorias was already dead when we meet him, Ornestein was an obstacle and I never even bothered Gough.
Honestly the two surviving members seem like they've given up. Ciaran is speculated to have died, so I guess only Gough is left at the end of the game.
| OakheadLord chapter 1 . 2/26/2015
I was kind of hoping that the Dark Lord would be a GiantDad when I read: "Mask of the Father."
| Guest chapter 15 . 3/29/2014
Hi, any chance you could make a sequel? This ending is very well-written, but far too sad!
| TURKEYFEATHER chapter 15 . 3/24/2014
so Gough is forever blind and lost, Artorias is lost to the Abyss, Ciaran is killed eventually and Ornstein is brought back to life to guard anor londo. A very sad ending indeed.
| MungoJerry chapter 15 . 2/25/2014
... :( That's not how I acted...
| Sakurada Kiritsugu chapter 15 . 1/23/2014
Damn... Poor Ornstein... poor Gough... Poor Artorias and Ciaran... This was one of the saddest endings I have ever seen. Worst is that it was a canon ending too... Still, you did a good job.
| EScraper chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
But, you can't quit! Pweeeese! This story is great! Take a break from it, and come back WHEN you enjoy writing it! But, if you are adamant on quitting, you'll stick around the DkS community?
Better f*cking do.
| EScraper chapter 12 . 11/22/2013
Yay, new chapter! Well done!
| Tokyo Express chapter 12 . 11/21/2013
| hnameh chapter 12 . 11/21/2013
Awesome chapter. Did not expect Havel's power to be so gruesome. And did that giant just start a Demon's Souls crossover?!
| EScraper chapter 11 . 10/11/2013
Er... Bestiality? I don't think Sif and Artorias are that close. (Ciaran being called a bitch as well seems a little out of character for Ornstein, but, your story)
I think Robert would have been a better name instead of 'Bob', Bob sounds a little too modern compared to Robert.
In any case, interesting and great as ever. Keep going!
(Could I possibly see some more from Arty's point of view? He isn't very frequently show in this story.)
| anon chapter 10 . 9/26/2013
while it was a bit strange a first, i am rather happy you made the silver knights more human. sure you'd expect them to talk battle tactics, but then it would have been boring and expected. keep going.
| Paragonstein chapter 10 . 9/23/2013
Not exactly how I would imagine Silver Knights to talk. You know... Cabbage? I imagined them to chat tactics, battle techniques or at least be more serious than your average Joe.
Meh, it's your story, but it's still very strange.