Reviews for The Black Star
babyvfan chapter 48 . 9/10
And now it's done, she sings triumphantly. Happy the story ended on a good note, although I really didn't want expect anything less since things were already going well for them. You did a nice job with the story. The only negative I have is the fact that the chapters dedicated to under the dome years was a bit extension. And kinda dimmed down the upcoming war. So much was talked about their lives there that it was like they were living in a world completely removed from the war.

Other than that, it was nice
babyvfan chapter 45 . 9/10
Sorry for that. Unfortunately people still copy other people's fanfics. It sucks and proves that ff needs to really boost up the security
babyvfan chapter 44 . 9/10
Damn *wide, stunned eyes watching Arthur storm out and lets out a low whistle* I sure as fuck didn't expect that. I definitely didn't see that coming. Guess the doormat wimp finally found his voice
babyvfan chapter 41 . 9/9
So in conclusion with this chapter, things are going well for more and not so hot for others. Glad to see Dumbledore is doing awesome, she says sarcastically Soooo deserves it
babyvfan chapter 40 . 9/9
Another nice chapter
babyvfan chapter 39 . 9/9
I'm so happy Sirius. I'm amazed it was done but I'm still glad it was
babyvfan chapter 38 . 9/9
Congrats on reaching the 1000th favorite.
babyvfan chapter 37 . 9/9
Payback is indeed a bitch and it is being well deposited ;)
babyvfan chapter 36 . 9/9
You have no reason to worry. It happens. And you have no reason to worry. You did a nice job
babyvfan chapter 35 . 9/9
*slowly slides for cover as I read the last part* I am so glad I am not Lucius. That's all i can say. Though it will be hard now to get the picture of the Dark Lord and his squad trying to get into the manor with their nightwear and having their asses immediately thrown out.

As for the former Weasley brothers *shakes head* Molly is such an idiot, Arthur is a grade-A wimp. That's all I can say.
babyvfan chapter 34 . 9/9
Jesus Christ...8 years...8 long years. I need time to process. Dear lord
babyvfan chapter 33 . 9/9
Just wow...that's a whole lot of kids...thankfully the dome has space. Seriously I can't get over it. They spent that much time under there
babyvfan chapter 32 . 9/9
I'm so shocked with how much time has passed. I mean...did Voldermort just stay in his hole, plotting? What about Hermione? I noticed you didn't talk about her too much
babyvfan chapter 31 . 9/9
very nice as always. happy everyone is so happy
babyvfan chapter 30 . 9/9
I definitely didn't expect twins. I was thinking it would be a girl since a lot of drarry mpreg typcially have the firstborn be a girl. But hey, I'm happy.
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