Reviews for The Descent is Easy
MissingMommy chapter 1 . 7/7/2013
Gosh, darling, I'm so far behind on your reviews that it actually scares me.

I love explorations of Peter. I love seeing what others think cause him to betray his friends. And this is the best one I've read. He didn't really want to, but he found himself in too deep when the Death Eaters came after him for information.

The way that he changes - not talking, losing weight, not showing up to meetings - going unnoticed by the others, by people who are supposed to notice almost everything is really sad.

[Though your heart is heavy with guilt, you betray them almost without a second thought] - I like this. He's come so accustom to betraying them by then that it happens almost without thought. It really shows how far he's fallen.

One thing: [ your apartment ] - it's "flat" in England. But that hardly matters.

Nicely done, darling! :)
yellow 14 chapter 1 . 5/16/2013
Brilliantly insightful. Keep writing
Fire The Canon chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
Laura, you just made me feel for Peter! After everything he did, I felt sorry for him!

This was absolutely beautiful. I love that you wrote it in second person too. It just suited so much, and the fact that we saw an insight into Peter about how he started out not wanting to, and then sunk too low to the fact that he killed Cedric...

This was brilliant. Well done!
CatchingCraziness chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
I feel a strange amount of pity for Peter after this. Very well written. :)
Macceh chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
Wow... I mean just wow... completely believable and beautifully written.
bluebook1496 chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
Wow, so dark, but I feel like that's what really happened! Great job!