|Reviews for Torn|
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/8/2015
I loved it was so emotional
| Shona.x chapter 1 . 10/28/2014
So I finally read this, and wow! I just have no words. I was expecting this to be about them breaking up/saying goodbye for good and I thought that was going to be hard to read. But Lauren dying? it makes me wish this was just about a break up. Outstanding writing though, as per usual. Now I've read this I feel like i'm able to read any story about Lauren and Joey. Such an amazing one shot! Can't say I will have the strength to read it again though, at least not for a long time. Xxx
| holly snowden chapter 1 . 8/10/2014
that was so sad I cried it was beautify written I cried through all of it
| Lxa chapter 1 . 5/11/2014
I am actually sobbing right now!
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/3/2014
Made me cry n I'm not just saying tha got tears in my eyes
| alanna chapter 1 . 6/14/2013
this story made me cry
| Luc91 chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
Wow I'm speechless almost. Expected her to die but the whole setup and reasons didn't predict at all. It was written so well, tough to read but that's a good thing, and so heartfelt. Just everything flowed and fitted so well with every detail. Feel like I need a lie down now. Amazing job!
| JourenBranning chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
Omg every sentence made me cry such a sad and touchy and meaningful story wow and it was so powerful and I hope that never happens and I sorta do hope that it happens but yea your an AWSEOME writer keep writing as AWSEOME as you are and please carry on with your AWSEOME book which is sanctuary obsessed with it Hun please keep writing hope to see your name on my bookshelf home in the near future so good Hun well done carry on with your writing and also I hope to see your name on the credits of eastenders as main writer or something that'd be AWSEOME HAHAHAAHAHAHAHH anyways keep writing chilling living farting parting buying shillings and stay AWSEOME BRUV JourenBranning! ;-D
| lovelove94 chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
This was soo sad but written very well you should be proud. I really hope nothing this bad happens on the show cause that would be heartbreaking xx
| Joules38 chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
Oh my goodness, I don't think I've cried so much before while reading a fan fiction story, really powerful stuff. Thank you for sharing and like you I hope this never happens on the show.
Thank you for sharing even if it made me cry !
| C chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
Really liked this one-shot even though it was a sad one! I hope nothing as bad as this happens on EE! Hope you can do a happy one-shot next time cause your amazing at them! ;) xxxx
| Staceeyxox chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
Wow that was one emotional rollercoaster, but really good story. I hope this don't happen either would kill me. /3 It's hard to watch EE lately..
| changeofscene chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
I haven't cried as much to another story! brilliant x
| RachelKatie14 chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
im actually crying this was so sad :'( if this actually happened .never watching eastenders again :/
| accentsxoxox chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
I think this would have been an eye opener for Joey. You had me in tears. I really do hope we don't see anything like this..