Reviews for A Different Jutsu: Part Two
ZaeTheWonder chapter 24 . 5/4
Ngl the Pupper soul collection was dope. when you had him take chiyo puppets i thought you were gonna have him make the 9 masked puppets menma had
ZaeTheWonder chapter 22 . 5/4
The leafs getting fucking destroyed and my man naruto just enjoying his honeymoon and getting head
what a life
JustItachiWithCatEars chapter 9 . 1/12/2021
i am now certain they are based on pokemon moves after reading a bit further-
JustItachiWithCatEars chapter 9 . 1/12/2021
is it just me or are the dark style techniques based on pokemon moves-
A.L.P.N chapter 40 . 11/1/2020
Hello Alky Uchiha93,
loved the story of A Different Jutsu Parts 1&2 Looking forward for part 3 of this story
DeadlyVengence chapter 40 . 5/13/2020
Is part 3 ever coming
Dalthale1642 chapter 3 . 3/17/2020
I also noticed all the DBZ references.
Dude chapter 40 . 12/23/2018
This last chapter has so many plot holes in it. Mindscape view sharing tv linked with his eyes, hug/hold family in mindscape for physical(spiritual) contact, puppets for physical form in the physical world, wood clones have a chakra system and can work independently, wood clones can scout the lands with wood chakra sensing or sage mode while using hiraishen to teleport all over the place and others to the battlefield when needed. All these jusy ignored for random non issues made into issues, waste of time timeskip, all these issues can be fixed easily
Dude chapter 28 . 12/18/2018
Honestly, rock Lee's sword style is stupid and inefficient, he's good but any higher level swordsman could probably rekt him in a sword fight cos he literally can't use his taijutsu with his swords on his hands, you should've just had naruto melt down the swords and turn them into gauntlets cos rock lee is seriously being held back by those swords, sure he got some little tricks like the lightning element but now you've turned a taijutsu master into a sub-par swordsman. This is like raising a tiger to hunt like a blood hound, sure the tiger could be able to sniff out some prey but would never be able to do it quickly and efficiently as a bloodhound can especially if the prey can outrun a tiger and vice versa, a blood hound can stalk prey but it doesn't have the natural camoflage of the tiger pelt or miscle mass to creep up on to its prey and pounce out of the bushes to kill it in one shot. These things are called natural gifts and you completely ignored rock Lee's taijutsu, sakuras chakra control for the finer arts of medic jutsu or genjutsu, sasuke's sharingan which is perfect for ninjutsu and taijutsu and negi's genius analytical combat ability to see techniques, break them down, recreate them and improve them. You were too focused on just naruto and his power
Dude chapter 24 . 12/18/2018
Dude chapter 23 . 12/18/2018
Are you retarded? Literally everyone fucking dead and dying and then FINALLY you want to bring naruto in, WOOOOOOOOWWWWWW THAT WAS A GREAT PLOT TWIST, THAT WAS SMART STRATEGY WOOOOWWWWWWWWWOOOWWOWOWOWOWWWWWWWOOOOWWWW. Really? Why even bother protecting the village at this point? Naruto can't save anyone now cos they're dead, strategically speaking, they either should have called him at the start of the fight or warned him to escape and hide, bringing him in as a last resort with no back up is literally dumb ass plays cos now he's gonna rage at the deaths with his head up his ass and just attack like a dumbass but no, plot armour
StrikerTheFallen chapter 40 . 12/19/2018
I followed this story since you started part 1 and since then I've reread both parts idk how many times. You have an amazing writing ability. Never was I bored in any chapter you wrote. By far if I had to choose my favorite author on this site it would be you. I wish you had continued to write more fic but non the less thank you for bringing me on this journey you wrote out. Take care and best of luck to you in all you do in the real world
Dude chapter 19 . 12/17/2018
Naruto is legit weak, he should master his skills instead of soul draining more people cos he literally has kage memories and yet he is literally getting outplayed by everyone he fights. All that power and all those techniques and naruto just uses the same weak jutsus over and over, you would think he actually had a normal sized chalra pool with all the small skills he uses. Rasen nova? Stupid, fire manipulation was his weakest and yet he doesn't use a water rasengan, wind, earth or lightning, no, he uses his weakest element all damn day. Wood clones that can actually survive for a bit? Lotsa jutsus, not enough hands to use em? NO just fight with someone weaker than yourself and risk them dying why dont ya? Sage mode? Kyuubi chaakra? Snake sage? Summoning jutsu? NOOOOO I'll just fight woth normal stuff like dragon bomb jutsu, he obviously won't have a counter to a jutsu that EVERYONE KNOWS, no, i got this
Dude chapter 9 . 12/16/2018
Tsunade was pretty retarded as a hokage, canon and this story, always underestimating and overestimating her ninjas for missions, it's like she is gambling but with peoples lives and always loses
Dude chapter 7 . 12/16/2018
How do you make a slip stream when you're literally pushing air behind you to fly?
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