Reviews for Hinamori Amu: Princess of Mafia Royalty
Guest chapter 29 . 7/21
Your story was awesome! But I'm still confused tho. Who died? Was it Nagi?
Guest chapter 23 . 7/21
Can I murder the Fujisakis? Like please, cause they're evil?
Guest chapter 17 . 7/21
Um, can't you like, write on a computer of some sort (e.g. PC or laptop) or just write down your ideas on a note book or something? (I'm just sayin'.)
Guest chapter 14 . 7/20
Btw, Amu should be cracking her knuckles.
Guest chapter 9 . 7/20
Um, I'm confused. Exactly what happened to Nade anyway?
Guest chapter 29 . 10/16/2016
I cried during this chapter so much, it just got to me.
RoyaisAwesome chapter 29 . 1/19/2016
OOOOOHHH, Nagihiko died, not Ikuto... Wait, how did he survive?
MisfitsAndOutcasts chapter 1 . 7/24/2015
First chapter and I already know this is gonna be a favourite!
FayeTheBitch chapter 3 . 11/9/2014
Okay, um, I don't wanna sound harsh or anything but here are just a few comments. First, When something is rated 'T' on here, people aren't really allowed to complain about swearing so your fine. Second, The major crime ring in Japan is known as the 'Yakuza'. It is Japan's version of the Mafia basically. Just so you know! :)
Hannah L-Sama chapter 29 . 9/20/2014
Wow, that was great! I haven't reviewed it ever or anything cuz I hadn't gotten a profile, but I've been reading this story for a while! It's so cool that you finished it! I liked the ending. I also liked the funeral scene, you did a good job portraying the emotions. Anyway, if you write a new story I'll be sure to read it! Congrats and good job on this story! :)
warmheartxoxo chapter 1 . 9/21/2014
It's great so far! I'm already hooked!
Pizza girl chapter 11 . 9/12/2014
ohh... nice.
Guest chapter 9 . 9/12/2014
WTF NAGI IS CHEATING ON RIMA LIKE WTF I THOUGHT- WTF UNBELIEVAEBLE
Dragongirl2319 chapter 29 . 9/12/2014
I knew that Nagi had to be the one in the box when you were purposely leaving out the name. It's still sad, but I was also kind of happy that Ikuto was alive. Man, I can't believe that it's over! This story's been going on for a while and I'm definitely going to miss it! Good luck on your future projects!
noeru kagayaki chapter 27 . 8/2/2014
Your earnest? Really? A death threat? WTF? Okay, i heard about sick fans and things like that but I didn't expected that those are present in fiction fores...
Uaaaah Nagi! WHYYYYY? :-((((
IkutoAmu: Thanks good. Finally you bring them together.
Everything: Your writing style is good as ever in the last two chapters. I just think the whole describing is a bit boring, but killing of course it belongs to the plot...
So as you said it, please end this story but don't put you under stress!
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