Reviews for Second Chance
Luvliacd chapter 5 . 6/6/2017
I can't wait to see what Ron's reaction will be, and Ginny's too. How will Molly react? I'm looking forward to your next chapter.
Guest chapter 5 . 4/18/2017
The reaction from the Wesley's would be great
Update please
Princesakarlita411 chapter 3 . 3/7/2017
Update soon
Man of Constant Sorrow chapter 5 . 11/19/2016
Every chapter up until this one was well written, this one is awkwardly worded and really shows your English is not your native language, please try to rework it or else have it beta'd.

Very nice story all in all
Red Phoenix Dragon chapter 5 . 11/18/2016
A good chapter to continue plans. Good to get Kreacher onside and for Sirius to discover his brother's sacrifice. But will he tell Remus and start to ask questions about Harry's maturity? What will Sirius do when Kreacher's spying information makes him to do something but Dumbledore doesn't want to interfere with Voldemort?
Great for Harry to ask Hermione to be his girlfriend. Now they will see who really are their good friends?
Harry needs to get Dobby onside and have him destroy all of the toads blood quills.
So what is Dumbledore thinking about the new Harry and Hermione?
Thanks for sharing your story. Please update soon.
starboy454 chapter 5 . 11/18/2016
good update
BMS chapter 1 . 11/18/2016
Interesting start.
Two things:
You should separate characters speaking from the rest of the paragraph. While you did this toward the end of the chapter at the top of it there are several places where it all runs together.
and Story wise:
Your death is coming off as a Bully.
I take exception to is the way Death called him stupid over and over, basically he's behaving the way Snape, Malfoy and the Dursleys did and abuse of any kind is hardly the way to motivate someone to do better. Also, it was Hermione who pulled away from Harry over the book not harry choosing the book over her (he offered to share w/ her after all) that drove her away.
I will read farther but so far the tone is rather off putting for me.
god of all chapter 5 . 11/18/2016
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
Vegasman59 chapter 5 . 11/18/2016
Good chapter!
Sampdoria chapter 5 . 11/18/2016
Thank you so much for a great update, the changes Harry made in this chapter was brilliant:-))
bet7368 chapter 4 . 11/3/2016
I will like and follow. See how your story goes. Thank you for writing it.
Red Phoenix Dragon chapter 4 . 11/3/2016
A good chapter for Occlumency and nice bit of details and the twist about what the muggleborns miss because all the Pure-bloods are taught early. One wonders how Ronald cleared his head.
Good thinking for his plans but Harry needs to bring Dobby, Winky and Kreacher on board to help. As for Umbridge Harry could let her have the locket and then follow her with the Sword of Gryffindor and watch the locket strangle her.
Good to get Snape onside and avoid the lessons but will Dumbledore still insist just to keep the hatred between Snape and Harry.
So did Dean get the Orientation as it would be unlikely Hermione missed a class. Maybe Dumbledore cancelled the class to save money.
Thanks for sharing your story. Please update soon.
horntailrider chapter 1 . 11/2/2016
Good story, but wonder how Harry ended up dying if he got hit by the killing curse, when death tells him he won't die because he will still have the horcrux in his head. Did he get rid of the horcrux before he went to Voldemort? Otherwise it not bad.
Vegasman59 chapter 4 . 11/2/2016
The only thing missing was the look of ultimate surprise on Snapes face. It would be funny to break his facade. Great stuff.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/2/2016
It is a basic rule of writing that only one person talks per paragragh. Having 2 or more people have a dialog in one is hard to follow and just lazy writing.
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