|Reviews for Consequences of Revelation|
| CaseOfTheMondays chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
Awesome! The chapter, and future chapters are long (about three of mine) and the plot is likeable. Can't wait to see the next chapter!
| Lazurman chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
Anger can be one helluva motivator when it comes to writing. Rants like this are just what Halo needs, someone willing to blow plotholes wide open and explore the consequences of poor script decisions. Amazing work; can't wait to see the meeting between Fireteam Crimson and Blue Team.
I can just picture in my mind Palmer getting rip-roaringly drunk knowing that the undisputed King of Spartans-the Mother-Fracking Master Chief-hates her guts. Payback's a beeyatch!