|Reviews for The Champion's Tale|
| Superstar Kid chapter 31 . 8h ago
This chapter was one I was waiting for. When Hawke helped Feynriel. and confronted the demon that helped her become a blood mage to save Bethany. I was expecting a bit more confrontation but Caress underestimated Hawke, like all the demons in the fade, they knew her power, but they underestimated her. I like the conversations not to mention the friendship between Hawke and Feynriel, not to mention the talk between the keeper and Hawke, seems like the keeper knows a lot more that she says, well she's a good listener when it comes to the wind. Now she that she helped a friend, not she has to calm down Aveline, and probably hear another one of her lectures. Of course we know that they did all that lecturing because they care. This will be interesting to see what happens next. Keep it up
| Kylemoor chapter 31 . 14h ago
I always found the way the Keeper handled the situation with Merril and the Eluvian to be frustrating. And that was probably the purpose of it in the game. I like that you've given more reason why Merithari is wary of it here.
| CreatedInFyre7 chapter 31 . 16h ago
Hahaha time for Hawke to get chewed out again :P
| Lupi-wolf chapter 30 . 3/9
Can you have one or more of them go off on Hawke in the next chapter, that would be real neat.
| Superstar Kid chapter 30 . 3/8
I like this next chapter nice variations on this mission. As always I like what you added on Hawke's thoughts, more members of the group helping out. Not to mention the friendship of Seamus and Hawke. Of course Hawke's friends reacting to Leandra making stuff for Isabela, and Fenris, I wouldn't be surprised that she made something for Varric and gave it to him when he doing his charming of her for Hawke's baby stories. Not to mention the conversations with Hawke and the Arishok were interesting not to mention the dance around that Fenris and Hawke are doing when it's obvious that they like each other (I bet even Aveline and Merrill knows and you know how they are.) Sooner or later Althea is going to have to go to the Gallows and talk with Bethany, she can't continue to blame herself, when it isn't her fault. Next chapter it's going to be interesting since I think it's going to involved a certain unofficial protégé of Hawke's. Love to see what happens.
I also love your other story. Keep them both up.
| CreatedInFyre7 chapter 30 . 3/8
Events are always huge when Anders and Fenris are civil to each other or even agree, like with the thing with Merril in Act 3. God I hate that quest.
I don't remember this quest much. It really has been a long time since I've played this :\
| doubledamn chapter 29 . 2/27
Nice. I actually enjoyed your (almost) entirely original touches ore than the 'canon-path' you've been doing. That being said I still want more of the canon-path, just try to work in some more of your own work into it.
| doubledamn chapter 27 . 2/27
Well that's more depressing than canon. In canon the family had a year to get over the death of one of the twins, here they're both ripped away at the same time.
Still well written though, well done.
| Ie-maru chapter 29 . 2/9
I love this so much!
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
| Lupi-wolf chapter 29 . 2/9
Drunk Hawke is fun.
| jaffa3 chapter 29 . 2/7
That was so cute! I'm glad to see some Hawke/Fenris moments even if they were small.
Fenris "anytime for you Hawke" the best
| CreatedInFyre7 chapter 29 . 2/7
Lol, funny Hawke!
Aww, Fenris taking care of Hawke is adorable.
| Arei-The Peridot Dragon chapter 28 . 1/28
Very nicely done. I like how she handled the templar incident. Always felt the Chantry was a little f'd up. The fact that they make their templars into lyrium addicts just to keep them leashed, (Alistair could use the templar abilities just fine without lyrium) just seemed wrong. And then there's the templars that get out of control like Alrik. That they turn a blind eye on things like that is just wrong. I hope your Hawke takes that bastard down hard!
| Lupi-wolf chapter 28 . 1/28
This is why I do like Templars. Can't wait for next chapter.
| Kylemoor chapter 28 . 1/27
Heh...enthusiasm. I sometimes like fan-verse better than the games because authors like you make the side characters grow as people.
Also when you go after Hadrianna can Varric comment on Fenris' diatribe on "mages always find ways to justify their need for power" by saying something about him needing to meet more dwarves? Or something of the like.