|Reviews for Revan's Rotten Holiday|
| Warden of Lore chapter 10 . 6/8
This is great. And Bastila... sooo hot yet such a bitch what the fuck is wrong with her.
| envy34 chapter 10 . 5/22
i love this story, the recruits he is picking up and the sarcasm is just awesome, bro, I hope you will decide to continue this into the future.
| scorpioneldar chapter 7 . 5/16
yeah big z would kill you come out of the page and kill you dead
keep your arms where they are so i can enjoy your work i like this
off to read and the heavans shall tremble when i finish this i enjoyed this little side project and hope you come back to it someday
| JumpingToaster chapter 2 . 3/5
A Revan who knows how to enjoy life. I approve.
| TKB17 chapter 10 . 2/28
This is gold. The first two or three chapters were a little rough, but after that it smoothed out considerably. The humor is well done, the charecter interaction great, and the setting amazing. It's a shame this apperes to be dead.
| SilverBladeStar chapter 10 . 2/8
I rather like this, but it seems dead.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/20
You do realize that you've got the second to most favorites in the entire 'Games: Starwars' category, and you left it hanging for over a year! If you finish it this will DEFINITELY become the top story. Please, please finish it. You literally have taken hold of 689 souls with your beautifully awesome and hilarious writing style. Please give us what we need!
| Mayhem296 chapter 10 . 12/18/2014
Damn, I was hoping for more.
Very funny story, well worth the read.
| S.R.457 chapter 10 . 10/5/2014
| Beloved Daughter chapter 10 . 9/13/2014
Couldn't stop laughing at your rendition of Revan. Love how he's not a holier-than-thou bastard. Yes, he does like corrupting women - but not that much more than your average lecherous male. Or rather, not that much more than your average lecherous male if he was given access to the Force...
| Chaos Cain chapter 10 . 8/11/2014
| Guest chapter 10 . 8/9/2014
I really enjoyed your take on Revan. It's so rare to see a fic where he's actually the Dark Lord of the Sith and not just another emotionless Jedi drone. I hope he stays that way throughout the story and doesn't have a grand epiphany at the end.
| swartzvald chapter 7 . 7/17/2014
Quite a bit longer than a month as it turns out.
| Wizco chapter 1 . 6/20/2014
Ch 15: The word you're looking for is 'trollop', not 'trollip'. And it's a synonym for 'slut'. I think a variation of 'cunt' or perhaps if you're looking to insult her as haughty and upper class, 'rah' would do - if I'm not mistaken.
For the rest, I'd like to see an update on this one day.
| Markus Ramikin chapter 10 . 6/18/2014
Cool idea, amusing story.
You could get those early chapters proofread, though. Oh and I hope if you're planning to make the dwarf a recurring villain, it'll be brief and infrequent. He's annoying as hell.