Reviews for When I Awaken
greenfairie chapter 1 . 11/19/2002
wow, you captured her thoughts pefectly. I love this. Bravo! *applause is heard*
Fantine really I have cruel parents chapter 1 . 9/7/2002
"and tell Cosette I love her and I'll see her when I wake..."

Lovely. The only mis-fic I've enjoyed. I'm thankful you haven't written another "Éponine gets the guy and is actually a perfect angel" fics. Just lovely.
Whisper to the Water chapter 1 . 8/28/2002
*sniff* get out the tissues...it's an excellent representation of character in first-person.
Ela chapter 1 . 8/25/2002
Ooh, a new recruit! Yay! Me like! I can't 'till you get to Gavroche! (Well, that's me for ya...)

Ela
AmZ chapter 1 . 8/23/2002
i really like this. i usually don't go for tears and sentimentality, but this sounded honest enough. good job!

a_z
Manon chapter 1 . 8/23/2002
I like it. The opener is especially good - "my bleak world of milky gray and diluted sunlight". Nice.

"Teen" is out of place here; even the word "teenager" is a neologism. Maybe "girl". Also, you could stand to cut down on the ellipses.

Otherwise, it's sweet.