|Reviews for Joyce's Guardian|
| LDK chapter 1 . 5/13
Wow. Fascinating story, it was heatbreaking but I really love it all the same. Despite ending on a bit of upnote, the story maintains it's sombre tint. What you've done to Jack's character is intuitive and despite being dark in nature; it give the reader hope. Because at least Jack is still around! Thank you for writing this, great fic!
| Hailey Face chapter 1 . 3/3
Really cool and it reminds me of yugioh you know her spirit
| alexisbelt chapter 1 . 2/15/2014
This story was awesome. You are a genious. I love this.
| HGfan chapter 1 . 1/20/2014
This is so beautiful, in a sad sort of way. Sure, Joyce won - but at what cost? Anyone who has read Hunger Games would know that victory comes at a high cost, usually mental stability. Joyce will most definitely be haunted by nightmares for the rest of her lives. The only upside to it is that Jack Frost will (hopefully) be able to comfort her.
I love the fact that you made them have a snowball fight, much like how it was in the movie. Even if it did end up becoming a bloodbath in the end, at least there were a few precious moments of childhood innocence before the cruelty of Hunger Games tore it apart.
It was already sad enough in the original movie that Jack Frost wasn't believed in (until Jamie happened, that is), but in the bleak world of Panem where everyone is just struggling to survive really hits it even harder. I can totally see how the other Guardians disappeared because no one believed in them anymore - how could they, given the circumstances? In the end, it's the Guardian that wasn't believed in that survived, but it's sad how he survived - off the pain of the others, when he should have been the one bringing fun and joy to others.
I also love the little details you have in there, from the fact that President Snow didn't believe in Jack Frost (I'll honestly be more surprised if he did, considering that no one else does), and even how easily Julian was replaced, echoing Seneca Crane. Your writing style is beautiful as well. This is just a beautiful fic! I'm so glad I took the time out to read this. :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
| I'm awesome and y'all know it chapter 1 . 10/9/2013
She won. I loved the scene with the snowball fight. It was so sad though, how it went from snowballs to knives. Great story.
| englishcrybaby chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
You. Are. Amazing. Just tell yourself that, coz it's true. I don't usually like crossovers, but this was perfect! I cryed... I am so emotional...
| Sephie chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
Ooh la la I like It!
| Matthicus chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
I don't read crossovers much, ... at all. But this was very good and I enjoyed it. Good job!
| sarafine-ecleips chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
| FaithDaria chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
This was amazing. I would love more, but it's honestly perfect the way it is.
| catlover2976 chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
u should make more of it the story
| Alex Harrpain chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
Safe and Souns by Tailor Swift reading this fanfic Me tring to pull my self together after crying for a good hour or so...
Yeah, really bad combination if you think that I also finished Mockingjay today.
...And the worst part is... that I liked it...
VERY GOOD JOB!
| DarkHorseBlueSky chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
Yes, I know that Snow is kind of an idiot for not knowing that Jack was there, but there is a point in that. He was so preoccupied with the reality that he did not think to consider the fantasy, which is the same reason that there are not many adult believers in the Guardians. And after all, it takes faith to believe in someone you cannot see.
The reason that Julian O'Neal could not see Jack was because there was doubt. Even the smallest seed of doubt can corrupt the belief (even if it is the belief born of paranoia), and like President Snow, Julian did not completely believe his own theory. And, for the obvious. His madness at the end of the story cannot be entirely attributed to desperation. He was actually teetering on the brink of insanity. I cannot help myself; I like making mentally unstable characters with anger issues.
| C'est une Fangirl chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
Pretty good fic. I liked the crossover of The Hunger Games and Rise of the Guardians.