|Reviews for Together|
| 217 chapter 1 . 12/18/2016
I was really excited to see that you wrote Fast and the Furious fanfic, especially Dom and Letty.
The 'well manicured nails on his back" was a lovely detail.
Lol, Hector's response to Dom.
I enjoy how you lay out everything and the way the dialogue flows. I love how you broke down each scene, adding a time and description.
Dominic's protective side of Mia warms my heart, heh. You kept him perfectly in character. And when he had to swallow his pride to Letty, that was hilarious.
'You bet Torretto' I like how you added this. I laughed when you kept her saying 'skank'.
I really enjoyed the story. Thank you for writing this :)
| Princess of Darkness17 chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
OMG I LOVED THIS! haha so true to the characters!
| Simone Frank chapter 1 . 5/14/2013
more please really good so far
| SunflowersAndHoney chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
Lol! Okay, I totally loved this! You're an awesome writer! Update soon!
| DANDANI chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
Wow ! Great ! hahah
Pretty cool ! I loved it ! Thanks for sharing! hugs
| Paommt chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
Good! i like it...
| mac-reye chapter 1 . 5/13/2013